|Reviews for Tension|
| Sornek chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
i like the reaction of rachel!
| Ulathon chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Wait a minute ...
Is this the reason Fanny has not made an appearence in "Cold Reunion"?
I'm getting a bit worried here...
| Yuki chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Loved the story. Im more of a 1x362 fan, but i enjoy change once in a while. I allways love the detail and emotion you put into the stories.
| tmcala chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
You know that I need more of this, right? I'm usually totally not into 1/86, but as I read, I was like, "OK, I like this."
But, he just HAD to be with 362, didn't he? I'm really glad you had her be mad at Fanny, because that's realistic. Girls are always mad at the other girl, not the guy. I kind of like that this was just a quick little tidbit, because we have no idea if there was sexual tension before their argument or if Nigel and Rachel's relationship was strong...I have like a bajillion questions floating around in my head right now.
Me gusta muuuuucho,
| angelraider chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Evil!Rachel, hmm, yes? Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I can sorta see Rachel at the end line. A slightly older her, sorta anime style, shadows covering the top of her face while she just sorta smiles pleasently-as if a solution has presented itself to her. And then she cocks her head to the side lightly and turns around, and then it sorta pans in on her scowl.
XD XD XD LOVE IT!
| Lord Malachite chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
This was so worth reading for that fun and sensuous sexual tension that has always existed between Nigel and Fanny-even if it's not much of a pairing within the fandom, and could likely end up as a relationship based much more on sex than love when shown at their older ages like this-but what matters is it's fun.
The second half makes it deliciously sinister. You could easily turn Rachel into the more sexually aggressive type, as seen in your "Of Ships And Their Sails" parody, or as already mentioned by a previous reviewer, it could be a diabolical prelude to "As It Should Be."
Honestly, I think you should dare to turn it into something more-perhaps something of a contest between Fanny and Rachel-made all the more enjoyable if Fanny remains unaware of the blonde's intent. Just a thought that's already eating into my brain. I'd LOVE to see what else could be done with this!
| Rachpop chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
And thus, the prologue to "As It Should Be" is born :)
They are connected, right?