Reviews for Last Dance
alli62 chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Dads are the best. Beautiful story that made me cry.
debslmac chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
so sad...
megan hollywood00 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
i am crying right now well bawling i love all your storys you are amazing
Twipotterfreak28 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
beautiful. just...beautiful.
Sidney Ella Ford chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Being the severe daddy's girl I am, this made me cry. It's beautiful and sad and sweet and something that hit home with me. I really like this, even though I regret reading it (only because I hate crying, not because it was bad), and I just wanted to let you know how amazing it was.
bendigo chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Loved your short story. This is exactly how I think Bella would honor her father.
BELAVERA chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
VERY NICE! I liked it.
Winter-Hale chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
i was near tears while reading this .
Lulabell75 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
That was good. Definitely good for a cry.
Spastic-Kitty chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
That was so sad. It made me cry.
ilovealion chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
That was sweet, even though it was about death. I have never read a FF story about charlie's natural death and vampire Bella's reaction.

Thanks for writing.
Sam chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
OMG I have always been utterly in love with your writing - much to the point of an obsession but this is utterly stunning! You have done yourself proud with the result of my wanting to read more...Even though it is a One-Shot!

Well done and LOTS of hugs and jiggy love :D 3