|Reviews for Does it hurt?|
| chloe200999 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Wow love it :-) :-) :-)
| DreamerAtDawn chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
| Treskttn chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
That could have been rated K.
I LOVED IT! SOOOO MUCH! I actually never thought about it before. Here for some tips:
try spacing more.
try not using italisized words (ik ik, i like them better too.)
every person tht speaks should get a space in between do u can decipher it.
but i understood it completely and loved it :) great work!
| i regret being here and 12 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
KAWAII! thats all i gotta say rite now...umm...bye!
| FelynxTiger chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
i think i did read a similar fic as this one, very cute indeed! meh cliche as you say buut it was ok :) , the paragraphs were slighty confusing u need to separate then just a little more, they way i like them is that made a different one for each person that talks
| crazynerd chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Awww that's sounds like the response bb will give. That's y he is my favorite character
| Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 12/9/2010