|Reviews for Under The Surface|
| miisilveru44 chapter 8 . 11/30
So.. Izaya is dead... It is really izaya is dead? No. You hurting me, you hurting meee *cry* what the its a great fic which can make me feel saaaddd.. But i won't it's over, i need alternate endiinggg
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/13
This was well written. But i hated the ending. Anyway good job
| Weirdxyz chapter 8 . 8/10
Holy damn shit.
Jesus fucking Christ.
Oh come on!
I'm crying so much!
You, dear author, just broke my heart.
Huge props for that by the way, since not every story is able to affect me this much like your did.
Your writing is flawless. You kept them so in character that it's almost unreal.
Shit, I was still hoping that Izaya somehow managed to get out and would jump out of nowhere to reveal that he's alive. No such luck I quess! Anyway, even with this heartbreaking ending, I still loved this story from the bottom of my heart. Thank you so much for witing it!
| Ciel-Phantomhive13 chapter 8 . 8/4
Oh... My god... I feel like I got buried alive and suffocated because there wasn't enough air...
That was so sad!
| Yui's Sweet Dream chapter 8 . 7/24
Well this was more than bittersweet. It was just totally depressing. But it was beautiful. Depressingly beautiful. So I'm definitely gonna read ur other fics! Coz you write Izaya and Shizuo's personalities so well!
| Yui's Sweet Dream chapter 7 . 7/24
i meant 'control' in the previous review! I don't even know why I only wrote 'co' XD
But back to the story. Oh nooooooooooooooo. Izayaaaaaaaaaaaa sob. Just. Argh. Just sob. You write so well. You are like totally twisting my heart and it hurts ;(
| Yui's Sweet Dream chapter 6 . 7/24
Ah. Oh no. I knew just knew Shizuo couldn't co tell his temper... T_T
| Uchiha250 chapter 8 . 7/22
Gosh that was such an awesome story! I was reading the last chapter hoping that by some miracle Izaya would come back and at the same time I knew that that wasn't going to happen. It made me soooo anguish to read aaaaaaall those feels thou. Good job!
| Terry Nightstalk chapter 8 . 6/25
Beautiful, honest, wonderful, and so sad.
Is this on ao3? I'd really enjoy a pdf copy for my kindle...
- terry nightstalker.
| MiyukiNoMai chapter 8 . 6/20
Oh, come on! Seriously!
Why the hell do you do this to me, cruel world!
Goddamnit! I'm not crying! I'm sweating...
Through my eyes!
But really, it was amazing as heart-breaking as it was...
| Kry Chi chapter 8 . 5/14
NOOO! NO! NO! NO! Why!? Why! I swear this needs an alternate ending
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/25
You just broke my heart.
| Ichigoya chapter 1 . 4/25
First of all your fic is a masterpiece, like ... really. And I'm crying and I can't see shit and ... thank you for writing this because sometimes we need to cry anf be happy that you made all of us cried because only very good writing can me people cry and having their heart hurt and i don't even know if my english is correct anymore but hey thanks dear Author-sama
| MichaelisHearts chapter 8 . 4/12
You want a review?! You want a freaking review?! FINE. You GET a review! My heart feels like it's been torn out of my chest and forced through a paper shredder! I can't believe you did that! I feel like every single scrap of faith I had in humanity has just disintegrated into the atmosphere like it never existed! This story was painful... SO painful... you made my cry, Author-sama. My throat still aches from it, and my shredded heart still yearns for it not to be true... I feel broken. Thanks, Author-sama. I can take the time to appreciate the fact that the only reason I'm suffering is because your writing is good, but at the same time, I hope you don't hold it against me if I never read this, mention it, look at it, or even think about it again. I'm sorry, but I just can't. To me, this story no longer exists. Goodbye, Author-sama. You won't be seeing me again.
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/27
I...no, i can't
Is...is there an alternative ending? Like, an happy one? After all this crying i need to smile a little, .. Oh gosh, i beg u