Reviews for Day Break
Debbie White chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Cute story! Please keep going can't wait for the next chapter ! :)
Emerald Eyed Wolf Girl chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Loved it! xxx
kneon chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Cute little story.
AdonicaSS chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
You need more reviews for this delicious slice of lemon, Sunfleur!

Lunchtime lemons and a bit of domination. Kinda perfect.

Great job. Hope you soon feel the urge to write about their weekend adventures...hint!

Bonbon.Killer chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
woooow... that was awesome!
springbreezeflower chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Please write another story.
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Loveddddddddd it!
erika shoval chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Oh I loved this very HOT! Definitely not too much!
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
wow that was great loved it
Lezlee chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Well done! I really enjoyed this.
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Love it! Very fun to read wish I had lunch breaks like Bella's.
sydneytwilightmum chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I love this description: the dark honey resonance of his voice. And this: He pulls me very close, placing my right ear directly over his heart. The steady thumping is soothing. …that makes me sigh just thinking about it!

I find that the capitalisation of the He, Him etc is a subtle reminder to the reader who Edward is to Bella. I like that little detail.

Savouring – Tasting – Killing her with his brilliant tongue.. UNF!

and when she inhales him at the end I smiled….nothing like a delicious smelling man, especially a delicious smelling Edward.

Congrats on writing and sharing this with everyone, it’s a scary thing to put yourself out there! Well done and I can definitely see a possibility of continuing this! Just so you know *winks*
sonyabrady1971 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
OMFG! Just found this...I can't wait for more...are you going to continue it?