Reviews for Harry Potter and the Ring of Power |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good assignment for Harry and Hermione. I like that Percy's still Percy, no matter what. The Defence curse continues, I see. Whoever was teaching last year will be gone, and if all goes according to plan, Harry will only be there one year. They should just name the position "Defence Against the Dark Arts Guest Lecturer" and be done with it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the plot thickens! Poor Harry - can't even enjoy peace amd quiet at home with Death Eaters coming for a visit. Good to see Harry putting his teachings form Fleur to good use, and the scene with the explanation of the scar was appropriately emotional. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a nice series of scenes with Harry and Ginny. Nice to see Harry facing his embarassment and trying to get the straight dope on how to please Ginny - and Fleur was definitely the right person to go to. "Loads of times!" was just such a *Ron* thing to say! Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The prophetic dreams are an interesting plot development, and it's interesting to see Ginny's catharsis there. Harry needed to hear that. Her method of dealing with the portrait of Mrs. Black was good as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron password is highly amusing, and I like how you continue to show Harry's paranoia in crowds. I also like the idea of the Weasley's getting ideas from Dungeons and Dragons! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really liking the pace you have for Harry and Ginny moving towards a (hopefully soon) reunion. Nice gesture by Dudley - I hope we see him at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet reunion between our two protagonists. I know what Harry's thinking, riding around on the Underground all day. Last time I lived in a community with light rail transit, it was surprising cathartic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would Ron become committed to Hermione. She's leaving for a year and teachers are rarely allowed to leave the Castle except for teh Hogsmeade weekeds. In canon only the Headmaster or thsoe he sends on errands ever get to leave. So in essense he's not going to see her but one or twice for a year. It'd be stupid to any plans given those facts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked that Amycus charged Harry - good thinking on his part. Ginny's lighter was a really cool touch. Too bad Amycus took it - I hope Harry gets it back from him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start! Harry just can't say no to duty. Poor Ginny - he's finally back, and then whoosh, he's gone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You might want to mean this is AU in your summary. The career path, particularly in regards to Hermione is not canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Hope to see more of Ginny and Harry later on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent |