Reviews for The One That Makes Me Scream
FelicificFeline chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
It takes so much to evoke the voice of a character into someone's head, but when you successfully do that, you stop being a writer and start being a point of view narrator. I could hear her voice on every word. This is brilliant. :D
SparksFlyOut chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Are you by any chance Thelma? :D Bceause this whole thing sure sounded like her, and even though I normally don't much care for the first-person view in stories, it suited this very nicely. I always did wonder just how Azazeal got her in that chair, you know, and this doesn't seem like a bad explanation. I don't blame Thelma for believing him - hell, _I_ believed him after reading this, and I always hated his guts while watching Hex because I was madly in love with Thelma. But it proves a point of you being a very gifted writer.
lexynolongerwrites chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
This is good, really good. I don't know the characters, the backstory, aside from recognizing the name Michael Fassbender but this works splendidly on a lot of levels. Breathless heroine, hapless and knowing it, aware but unable to act and it just , well, the hot sex of course. Adored it. lexy