|Reviews for And All the King's Men|
| Frankie and Avery.dont ask chapter 7 . 7/13/2013
This is literally perfect. I don't even...Head canon accepted 100%
| mysticmoon1331 chapter 7 . 7/10/2013
i love this so much! thank you so much for writing this incredibly amazing story and sharing it here! i really loved the medal idea you had and your explanation of it. i love how well this seems to fit into the canon AOS world! 3
I think that this just might be my new head cannon. 3
thanks again for this awesomeness! 3
| Jimelda chapter 7 . 7/8/2013
Oh my dear goodness. I don't think I've read another Star Trek fic that has nearly half as much effort put into it as yours does. The way you connected everything, from the beginning to the end (nice parallel with the scenes there, by the way. I'm so glad McCoy finally gets some decent coffee!) and all the little remarks in between that keep popping up (especially McCoy's remark about Jim saving the world as a field medic. Wow), I am so beyond impressed I can't even put it into words. This Academy arc that you've created is absolutely fantastic (I read Convergence ages ago and never even realized it was part of a bigger picture) and delves so deeply into the characters backstories that I wish your ideas were able to be put into the movies. In particular I liked your take on Tarsus IV, and your reasoning behind it; how it's an event that was still likely to occur even in the alternate universe, but in a slightly different way. Jim not remembering being there was such unique plot point, and then learning of Toland's own connections to the colony just blew me away.
Gosh. Basically I'm just trying to say that this is one of the best Star Trek fics I have read yet, and the planning you put into this entire thing is astounding. Excellent work. I'm excited to go and read even more of your fics now. :)
Cheers and keep on writing!
| Arweyn chapter 7 . 6/29/2013
Holy smokes...this story...just absolutely amazing! I am astounded by the amount of details and twists and plots you stowed in one story. I love the brotherly relationship between Bones and Jim, and at some point I wanted to break down and start crying. You sure know how to captivate an audience. Really, the accuracy of this story is admirable and you really put a lot of effort and time in this magnificent story. Just...man...this is epic. You left me speechless and mesmerised. Fantastic, absolutely fantastic! Well done and thank you so much for writing this piece of master art.
| Aida chapter 7 . 6/15/2013
Your story is really great, i mean the plot, character's thoughts was really admirable. Hope you write always so that we'll be able to read splendid stories.
| MS chapter 7 . 6/12/2013
I am not good at this, so: BEST. STORY. EVER.
Thanks for making my day!
| The Fields of Asphodel chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Hi! I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story! Your writing is really good and the character depth here is amazing. I can't tell you how happy it made me to see that you have two even longer stories up - goodbye homework :) Thank you.
| Aralas Baggins chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
Love this story. I don't use the word story lightly, this is not a simple fanfiction anymore, this is a beautiful story I never want to end!
| TheWordThief chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
OH MY GOSH THIS IS PERFECT
I love this so much
And the bit in the author's note where Jim gives the medal back...little does he know, in a few years haha...
but seriously, awesome job, everyone was in character, the plot had me reading till gone midnight and I loved the relationship between Pike, Kirk and McCoy.
One of, if not the, best Trek fics I've read
| DoubleNatural chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
Awesome. I literally have nothing else I can say. Brilliant plot, great characterisation. Just fantastic.
I'll stop gushing now and go read your other fics.
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
| Aqualily6 chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
Absolutely incredible story, best I have read in months and months and months!
| ketren chapter 7 . 4/30/2013
This is amazing! I just love all of the thought that you put into these stories. Thanks for another great read!
| KalamityKim chapter 7 . 4/18/2013
I have read this story a couple of times and every time I am amazed at how detailed and realistic it is. You capture Kirk in a way that makes him both super-human and vulnerable. It's something that I miss in most stories. I am a huge McCoy fan and again you find the perfect balance between snark and compassion!
This was the first time that I read the post script at the end of the story and I laughed to myself while thinking "this author has background details on her background details!" I commit myself to the stories that I'm reading, so I love that you commit yourself to writing them so thoroughly!
| thesunwillshineclear chapter 7 . 4/3/2013
I think... I just read this entire story straight through. I honestly couldn't set it down! Your writing flows and the characters are written as, in my opinion, they're meant to be written. There are just so many things about this that I love that I could gush over but I wouldn't be able to name them all :)