Best virgin sex over. I love how good they are together. This fic is awesome and WHY haven't I read this before?

Is it possible to choke on fluff? Because I am. In the very best of ways.

i like the story

I think i'll be going to take a cold shower now!

So good-loved it. Once she started looking at Jake, his looks and what they could be, she couldn't stop craving him. Best friends plus some-that's cute and works perfect for them. I think she will be a jealous woman though after this not that she has anything to worry about.

So good. Serves her right-she needs to be in heat with erotic dreams of Jake. It's not a bad thing Bella. She's so scared that their friendship will go south if the relationship doesn't work out. He seemed to be doing really well with the just friends thing-even looking at other girls. So hot at the end. Love that her body wanted him.

Haha at not brown but milk chocolate-love the specifics. Like that she knew he was coming to eat the crusts. Surprised when he kissed her and then she kissed back. It was hot. Can't believe she told him he wasn't the one she was thinking about-that was cruel. At first it seemed like she only wanted to date him to get their friendship back but it seems like she might actually like to try out that idea. Oh man, she should have talked first. Wonder when she'll spill the beans or can't stand to just be his friend anymore.

I loved this so much! Even the smut!

Yay please continue!

You one upped yourself. Better than the original. Yaay!

Perfection.

I can't decide if i want to chuckle or slap them both upside the head. Adorable.

Love "plus some"... so good

So, so close to satisfaction

Loved the description of them kissing and hugging - so well written