|Reviews for Apprentices|
| epitaphed chapter 20 . 4/11/2013
I don't even know half the characters mentioned here or to the allusions to past events, yet I still loved it! Great narration, dialogue and characterization (to the point that I actually feel like I've read the comics or watched some of the cartoons before). Amazing, thanks for this :)
| CrystalOfEllinon chapter 20 . 10/29/2012
Oh, poor Thompson. You're in for way, way, WAY more than you bargained for.
Pissy Tommy is cute. "Attempts to ruffle Pissy Tommy's hair, is stabbed" Ow.
| Linuxgirl chapter 20 . 9/6/2012
Ah, sorry for the long wait (and thanks for the reminder), I was rather "offline" for the time being.
What a conclusion! Poor Tommy, after all that trouble he has to live with the knowledge that Mindbender will cook up another Would-be-emperor with his genes.
Love the way you painted Thompsons unhappy realisation that he does want to be trained and Tommy isn't the bad boy he pictured him to be. I hope we see more of him in the future. He's really a very good OC.
| willwrite4fics chapter 20 . 9/4/2012
Poor Kamakura, having to be a hostage. Poor injured greenshirts having to hear Storm griping for the whole ride. Poor Thompson... going through ninja training will be brutal. At least he'll have 3 other apprentices to assist... although that could be bad!
| TinySprite chapter 20 . 9/4/2012
Great chapter! Figures Firefly would pull something like that and the ending was a neat tie-up too!
| susan chapter 20 . 9/1/2012
I was waiting paiently for your story to continue. it was well worth the wait.
I wanted to let you know I had the same problem w/ my own computer they sold me a dead computer ( that I couldn't go and log onto the internet)
I let the company know it and the people I bought it from were fumming about being
used to sell computers that didn't work. they would back me up on it.
that said. I suggest you write a letter to the company letting them know this
keep a record reciept and everythng you did call or write send pacakage of how much it cost & reciept from mailing it.
I don't know where you live and that's not my buinesses to know.
but you can take them into small claims court for this the hard drive being dead all the running around you did to get a new one.
I suggest you don't buy fromthem ever again and let others know about it also.
| Dragowolf chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
Ohhh boy are they going to have to do another camping trip now that they have another apprentice? Or have Kamakura and Billy learned enough about working together that they'll work with this new clan brother better then they did with each other when Bill first came?
Great story! It was a fun family fic and a good adventure fic! But does Storm Shadow ever get his hearing back?
| Lady Jaye 1 chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
Also, like the sacrifices that SS had to make, the peeved Beach Head, and sneaky Firefly.
| Ami Ree chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
I love Dave! I swear he's my favorite green shirt. And it seems soon to be very tired and sore green shirt.
This was a great story Karama and I'm glad I finally started reading it. : )
This is a good beginning intro to Sean, Billy and Jinx if one doesn't know about them and you have made Tommy a more interesting character than I had originally thought.
| RainStorm4 chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
This was a great story! Do you think you'll do one about Serpentor now? You've certainly set it up well enough :)
| WestAero13 chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
ooooooooh, thompson torture! *rubs hands together* This will be goooooood!
Is it too much to ask for more billy kamakura love hate brotherly relationship while jinx fangirls in the corner? they're just soooooo cute! *puppy dog eyes*
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/23/2012
LadyJaye1 here. I can't seem to login at work and leave a review, which is probably for the best. Anyway, I liked the chapter and sorry for the brief review. This was just a short break from work.
| CrystalOfEllinon chapter 19 . 7/19/2012
I don't know why I found "You're heavy. Just saying." so funny, but I giggled like an idiot for about 15 solid seconds after reading that.
Also, I find Tommy thinking that "Okay, that was kinda FUBARd, but this STILL worked out great!" ridiculously endearing. Along the same lines of "Cat runs face first into a wall, acts like it meant to do it."
| Linuxgirl chapter 19 . 7/19/2012
Oh, just as you think the trouble is over ;-). Nice cliffhanger.
So, has Tommy's preference for the number six rubbed off on the apprentices or was Thompson just guessing (otherwise he really might make a good apprentice, noting things that make other predictable). Wonder if he realised, what Tommy pulled at the end of the chapter. Tommy, you little weasel ;-).
By the way, Thompson would fit perfectly in with Billy, he's almost as much skirting around authority as Billy. Tommy wouldn't mind anyway unless it interfered with the training.
Beach telling Recondo off for being too close around the spooks was priceless. Very nice.
I'm eagerly waiting for more
| Ami Ree chapter 19 . 7/17/2012
Just got on the "big" computer to read this. Heh, some "ninja" getting called out by Recondo and Dave. Have I mentioned I really like Dave? He's one of my more favorite OC's (Annie being another) Great beginning of a wrap up to the story, especially with the battle being one-sided. Can't wait to see how you end this and who gets to save poor Kamakura. : )