Reviews for The Perfect Mate
jodimarie63 chapter 1 . 7/23
Great idea for a story. Just a "fun fact" you may want to address - Male animals do NOT go into heat. They are ready to breed, at all times. It is the female of the species that enters the period of estrus during heat, and at that time, can become pregnant. But good old dogs, wolves and lycanthropes are able to reproduce as long as a willing partner is available.
Candyangelbaby59 chapter 3 . 3/14
Wow Some Werewolf Story I Ever Heard In my sex life So Why The werewolf Bite Dean? Because He's Perfect Werewolf Man wait hold up Why Dean Turning A werewolf then He bit Carmen on the neck and She going have a baby (His Real Name Is Conner nice name?) Dean and Carmen have Sex Three times I know Dean wanna to stay with her and The werewolf baby cute and Handsome baby boy? One Sec If Sam Was Thinking Madison And Madison Likes Sam Winchester Handson Hunter? Why both Sam And Dean Love different Werewolves women and why have Sex with A werewolf? Bye xxx Dean and Sam ? Good story good supernatural sex stories?
Dante chapter 3 . 12/25/2013
This was my first fanfic, and I must say, it was great. Very... Uh ... Intriging. While I havn't read fanfic much, I do read a quite a bit and write a little, and I noticed a few things though. First, allot of the dialogue didn't sound natural. Most people, especially dean tend to use shorter words, contractions, and more colloquialisms. In stead of "It's destiny my beloved." Try "It's fate babe." While it may sound less romantic, it sounds more natural. Other than that and a few typos (e.g. Her instead of him, his instead of hers or vice-versa), it was really great. I loved the angle of Dean as a wear wolf, the whole animalistic side, and the plot line of him protecting his pack.
Sammy Winchesters Wifey chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Can you update this soon please?
twilightjazz chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
love it please update soon
coley9498 chapter 3 . 1/10/2013
write more
coley9498 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
more plzzzzzzzzzzz
Please update chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
I love your story! I hope you update soon! :)
0netflixme0 chapter 3 . 1/9/2012
please write more soon.
Tokyorose627 chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
Please make more of this!
Shadows7X chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
Noooooo! They can't find him! Damn you both. Awesome update.
Shadows7X chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
Awww my god Conner so cute! Can't wait to read more on this.
Shadows7X chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Ohhh this is so excting! And Dean so HOT! Aww but poor Sammy
AmyLee22 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
This was sooooooo hot! Man I love this side of Dean. Mmmm, give me a bite lol. Please update soon girls )
Sammycrazyass chic chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
Wow that was freaking hot chapter girls loved it Dean really showed them two werewolfs not to go near carmen can't wait to see what happens next please update soon can't wait for more:)
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