Reviews for Should Have Been
777angeloflove chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Awwww! Sweet!
Peaceangel8000 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I loved this!
Raina Meldamiriel chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
AWW that was soo brilliantly cuuutte ! i loved every little bit of it xx
Lynn-G chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Awwww that was lovely!
Ender's Fangirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Awww cute. Love it!
krakelia chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Ah, so starved.

For a little fluff. And so my friend sent me this, and it was like chocolate.

Yes indeed. Cute and short.

Just what was needed.
Heart Torn Out chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
My first offical Spokc/Kirk slash and I LOVE IT!
Terminally Ambivalent chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
I loved this! And I just wanted to tell you that I think Spock's ending lines were perfect~ 3 Well done!

Two-finger salute,

ArwendeImladris chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Aww... this is adorable. I love the way you portray Jim - angsting and pining over what could have been, but trying so hard to stay strong. And Spock thought his captain had a 'physical aversion' to him... the poor Vulcan must have been so hurt!

So overall, great fic.

Do you mind if I point out just one tiny thing, though? Your Spock uses contractions, and it sort of disrupts the flow of his speech. I think you nailed his voice other than that, but you might want to be more aware of his contraction use in the future.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
oh wow too cute
AlyAngel chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
aww this is cute :P