Reviews for behind the lies of rivalry
Chris chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Damn didn't see that comeing
DannyPhantom619 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Cool
khizap chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Sixteen? Uh I'm going at least _30!
khizap chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
sweet :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Uhmmmm how old are they again?! Make them atleast like 16
sk8r dude chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
this is totally rad
heyitsme11 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Again,YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER! I HAVE NO IDEA HOW people write 'mushy stuff' like this in such an incredible way but it's great! Write more stories like these thank you very much!
KINGFISk 0950 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Pleeas write an nother pleeeeaaaaaas
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Guys there one called the longing and if you liked this one an wanted to be older an for it to be longer look at that one it has them In high school an it much much much longer around 6 chapters
Jade'sPetDragon chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Oooooooo steamy!
Anna McClain chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
You should continue the story. It is really good.
catgirllover chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
man u suck i want no sex in it
ClassicalCynicism chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Cute story, but I think you should've made them, like, seventeen instead of eleven or twelve. That just kind of makes it awkward. Other tha that teensy tiny little thing, this is really good. Very nice job.
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
:) Nice
loveloveLOVE chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
maybe you should have made them like 16 not 12 sorry just suggesting
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