|Reviews for A Pernicious Suitor|
| PrinceDarkLink chapter 2 . 5/3
Cute story. I liked the scene where al dressed Ed up. I can totally envision that actually happening. Update soon I hope?
| Jaist Majere chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
This is so good! I am really sad there isn't more of this.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
a), because then there will actually be an update :D (I'm so sad...)
| KyuuKitsunex3 chapter 2 . 10/16/2013
Faster updates with shorter chapters, but not shorter than what it already is.
So please update soon.
| 7thcircleofhell chapter 2 . 3/16/2012
i vote B longer chapter and later updates. i'm loving how clueless ed is and Roys toying with him
| BeyondMyReach chapter 2 . 2/12/2012
Lol. Al is hilarious to read about, as well as Ed's obliviousness. I vote for faster updates with shorter chapters, but if you are going to update your other stories (like The Invitation, or A Sacred Hell) then I'll chose the third option(Faster updates with shorter chapters for all)
I'm looking forward to your next update.
| dreamschemer chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
All that I have to say is that I'm a fan, and you should totally continue. With all your stories, not just this one, because they kind of rock :)
Have a nice day.
| VinylTearsFortheBroken chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE! I cannot WAIT to see Roys pervy reaction to Ed's tight shirt! *drools unabashedly*
| VinylTearsFortheBroken chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
I love it~! *twirls* Can't wait for there to be more chapters!
| HoPeLeSsRoMaNtIc-29 chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
NOOOOOOOOO! Damn cliffhanger! :'(
It's been too long since you updated...
Honestly, shorter chapters with faster updates is better!
| happyhappy chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
this is awesome and i agree you should update it, it sounds like it's going to end up really cute (a good thing) but you should update your excellent startrack story first! (pretty please!)
| ash1297 chapter 2 . 3/24/2011
I loved Al's little episode. This story makes me giggle the whole time I read it. (I read these two chapters for the second time just now and still giggle) My sister has that what's-wrong-with-you look and I'm trying to keep a straight face. As for the vote, any of the two is by me.
| KOHANAISYOURMASTER chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
I would prefer longer chapters with slower updates, so about once every 1 to 1 1/2 months. -w- Hope this helps some!Great story, by the way!
| Chocochips chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
This chapter was awesome. Please update soon!
| Lupin chapter 2 . 2/16/2011
You have no idea how sad I was when I saw there is no chapter three. This is one of the few (and possibly the best) Ed/Roy fanfics I've read, and it is incredibly depressing to be cut off when I was really getting into it. Disappointment aside, your writing is excellent - you clearly have a mastery of grammar and vocabulary that is seldom seen on FanFiction, and you appear to have an actual grasp of the characters you are writing.
I give this a 10/10... now off to see what else you've written!