I burst out LAUGHING at that last part.
#burstoutlaughing
#shadowsthecoolest
#dreamcrazy

that was cool!but the best was : However,at last minute,Sonic unexpectedly changed his mind and married Shadow instead. u keep being awesome!

Wow...

In all honesty, I think I did partially get what you were going for in this story. By the time Tails started talking to Eggman during the hunt, I realized that this was all a look into the human mind, and had occured after Eggman did something awful.

Well, while it was slightly terrifying, this was an excellent fiction, UL. Not only was it well written, but the psychological message was powerful and...scary, for lack of a better word? XD

It reminds me a lot of some of the movies I've watched over the last few weeks, all having to do with crime and the psychology behind it. Scary stuff.

Anyway! Back to your story. I'm still just really impressed that after all the seemingly unconnected events, you made it all work. I think you definitely should be proud of this.

Nice job!

Hahaha! I read that whole thing, sat back in my chair for a moment to really absorb it all, and then just uttered under my breath, "...What the hell?" And then I laughed.

However, I didn't mean it in a bad way. More like a "that-was-probably-the-most-in-depth-conversation-I-have-ever-heard-between-Rouge-and-Knuckles-and-it-was-about-heart-beats" what the hell. XD

And then the horrible irony. Hilarious in that "this-is-ridiculously-awful" sort of way.

Despite its strangeness, I honestly do enjoy this fiction. I like how you adapt your writing style now and again to fit the characters you're writing about, and it really, really works well for you. Keep it up!

Ha! That ending made me crack up.

I'm really not seeing the point of these, but they're fabulous entertainment, so...I'll keep reading. :)

Good Lord. 0_0

Y'know, I've never liked Chris, but that was probably the most violent thing I've read having to do with him. It was insane, as is the rest of this story, and so incredibly OOC for Tails that it was...uhh, amusing? Except not? XD

But, enough about that. As for your actual writing, it was quite well done. For some reason, I especially liked your description of the missles, because it gave you a perfect picture of what they are like, while most authors would just go "Then missles rained down from the sky."

Anyway, uh...Great work! But try not to brutally murder anymore of Sonic X's children, alright? XD

Ha! Insanity. Pure insanity. And perhaps that's why its so entirely fun to read and bizarre to laugh at. I can't wait to read more!

The description once Knuckles woke up really made it sound, to me, as if Rouge was dead. Stone cold, sleeping soundlessly? Yeah, probably just me, but y'know.

I also couldn't help but notice Tails and Knuckles both snarling at Eggman's logo. :D And the missiles being the same in both dream. I've noticed more, but I'm lazy when it comes to typing. ;)

Hm. I highly doubt I understood much from this brilliant piece, but I'll share what I got anyway. ;)

Okay. I think in this, Eggman sees himself as an asset to the community, someone important who is or at least should be acknowledged and looked up to for his life's work and skills. All others in the gathering are left anonymous, unnamed to show his disregard or lack of appreciation of anyone who could be considered important but himself.

The Sonic animals are worth more points than the normal foxes to show how Eggman prioritises their destruction over any other possible threat to his cause. As is explained, he sees them as animals in order to justify their destruction. If they are unintelligent, wild beasts, their pain can just be disregarded and ignored. The Sonic animals are also more dangerous to show just how much of a threat he sees them as, and Tails' courage flaunts how unafraid of Eggman they truly are, as hard as he tries to make them fear him.

This all goes to show Eggman's regret for the deaths he causes in his efforts to dominate the world. He has a conscience, no matter how much he pretends not to or disregards it. His only justification for many of his actions is the global betterment his control will bring...or so he thinks. Could he be realising his reign only brings suffering?

Or perhaps I'm just looking too deeply into things. This is a brilliantly written, wonderfully intelligent piece, and don't you forget it. ;)

Haha, are all of these chapters like separate stories?

It's really puzzling for me, and I can't put my finger on it. Even though I've read this chapter before, from reading this whole fiction, the last chapter is my favourite. It's so twisted and wrong, but, in some strange way, funny.

Another happy ending!

Wow... I mean, wow :P

That chapter was powerful. I loved Knuckles' view on the heart, and it's really interested and, like he said, freaky. In fact, I was thinking something very similar yesterday, and how we can just die like that if our body doesn't do what we want it to do.

The irony was really good. But annoying. I don't know if that makes sense much. The writing wasn't annoying, it was just the pure irony of it all XD

Rouge's death was... actually in character. /She/ was in character, despite the fact she was dying. I loved the comment she made about the last thing she sees is Knuckles 'ugly mug'. I can certainly imagine her saying that at such a time.

Now, I can't help but wonder if there was any point in that dream. To be honest, the whole fiction has felt like a dream/nightmare to me.

This is really good. No seriously. I mean, I can't really pick out any criticisms. I hope you write more fictions, because, despite having so few, they are quite... professional? I mean, some of mine are pretty much all over the place, but you've ordered yours out, planned them and you've even written the chapters before publishing. Let's not neglect the fact it takes you a whole year to write a chapter and be content with it ;)

Yeah, this story is kinda weird, but you've written it okay. I don't like what's happening at all, so I doubt I'll continue with it. It was worth having a go with. Hope you continue it either way...

Ew, that chapter was disgusting. Pretty sure you wanted that to be so though and stuff. It's a weird thing you've got going on here, but I'll read on like I was told to by an author I forget the name of. I like the way you write, and despite the description not being very nice, it was written well and I have a feeling that won't make much sense.

~ Jason

HOLY (CENSORED) YOUR BACK!

...Well.

This is interesting. Reminds me of Flower, but much more...manly?

Eh.

Going through a dream or a nightmare of a Sonic character seems interesting. I'd like to see what you have in store for Tails (seems like a lead up to his dream, the last sentences).

...It's a nice idea you have, all written well. Keep it up, alright?