Reviews for One Last Sacrifice
FYAT chapter 5 . 2/12
i dont understand wye people oh so think sangheili and turians have any sort of resemblance... turians look more like a grunt kinda cross with a jackal with a fucked up split mandible. NOT just kind of like an elite.
FYAT chapter 5 . 2/12
and the spartan II augmentation had about a 50% casualty rate and the III's and IV's had no casualty's.

also dont think your spartan IV is anywhere near the level of a spartan II much less a III. or that will be B.S
FYAT chapter 4 . 2/12
You know spartan IV's are the old breed of ODST's therefore they joined volentarily so they would retain both their first and last name.

also as far as i have seen there were no casualties in both spartan III and IV augmentation.

you sure you are not thinking of the II's . because they were kidnapped and conscripted into the spartan II program at the age of six also the b
grudgematch chapter 15 . 4/11/2015
more please
Goldspark1 chapter 8 . 12/18/2014
You might want to change this chapter. All Spartans are trained at 7 months old. That is not true.
Goldspark1 chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
I am trying to understand on how a human and a turian are able to lift 1000lb. of armor onto the ship. I understand they dragged them but how did they lift him?
Tacotitan chapter 15 . 8/4/2013
Excellent work so far. Kind of jarring to get used to the fact that 77 isn't the same kind of Spartan-IV as the ones in Halo 4, but seeing as this was published prior to it's release, it makes sense.

I hope you update soon.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Spartan IV have real names the were volunteers they had near 100% augmentation rate
Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
An AI will never falter against a geth cyber attack
Eipok chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
How did the Geth disable the Titan of Light? Some kind of Reaper supercomputer or something? Because there's no way in a million years Geth by themselves could crack a UNSC Smart AI's defenses, let alone do it that quickly. So unless you explain that, I call shenanigans. Also, you said something about the S4 having childhood training? What was that a reference to? You going to explain that?
trix17 chapter 15 . 2/8/2013
do you have a picture of your spartan character
yay chapter 15 . 2/6/2013
Your back finally.
Invader Viceroy chapter 15 . 1/26/2013
yayyayyayyayyayyayyay update continue
Guest chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
Why are Spartans considered good guys again?
Dracconnis chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
Liking what i see
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