Well I do not normally go for the slash stories but I have loved all of your other work so I thought...well I can always stop right?. I am so glad I read this!. You really do have a gift and despite my initial concerns I LOVED it!. Thanks for sharing this version of Jasper and Edward... I would've never pictured them like this but you made it totally work!.

That was a sweet story and I loved your boys.

Yes, it was heaartfaily but they worked it out wonderfully in the end.

Very nice. My stomach got clenchy a few times, but it was very nice to have a HEA.

Nicely written - not much for slash but I really liked this.

Loved the story so much I added it to my C2 Longer is Better

You really put together a well developed story and took the extra step to show the path they took and truly made a complete one-shot.

All relationships have troubles .. it is how you choose to deal with them that reflects the strenghths or weaknesses of it.

:o)

I loved this!

I really enjoyed it! First time huh? I think you should try again, and again...! LOL! Thanks for sharing!

well...seeing as I rarely read slash, that was brilliant and kinda 'unslashy' if you know what I mean.

The emotions were there (as always in your stuff) and they totes drew me in!

Great fic xx

Followed this from girlnorth's rec on Jasper's naughty girls and glad I did. I like how you started with the angst and worked towards the HEA. Most stories like this seem to go the opposite way. I love both your boys in this, but especially Jasper. The way he's trying to contain his emotions and manipulate the conversation to stop it being to hurtful if it's going to end. just perfect.

Aww, sweet story. I really enjoyed this. I don't mind some angst as long as our boys get their HE. Beautifully written. You should stick with slash for a little while.

I really loved this fic. In fact, I recced it on the Jasper's Naughty Girls blog: .

First slash? Well, you done good! I liked it allot! Only a tiny bit of angst, just the way I like it.. You should write more! :)

I liked the story a lot. It was nice to read that they thought, they will get back together whatever happened.

Great job! I can't believe this is your first slash story. I kinda feel sorry for you, because now you'll be hooked! :-)

Wow! ok, seriously I cant beleive this is your first slash! This was absolutely amazing! The emotions were so real! You write exceptionally well. I really loved this one great job!