Reviews for The Smell of Love
Guest chapter 3 . 1/2
Hellsingsoildier ash evildead chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Nice story, well done, this deserves 5 stars
Moondog10 chapter 3 . 9/3/2014
Please please please update sooooooon. :)
Love the story so far.
And wondering if Naruto and Tenten are going to have more flirty moments like in the shop. Also relationship progress.
ray.g.odonnell chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
hey i love the story you do really good charater development it 2014 im jus wondering is there gonna be more i d hte for you to stop i hate romance but this is a really good story lol
Guest chapter 3 . 5/18/2014
You should continue the story
MDA chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
I really am enjoying your story. I hope you can continue this story one day. It is so interesting, and it got me sucked in. :)
Exeo Furzoli chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
I'ts really sad all the decent story variants come form lemons. I so much wished when I looked at the date stamp to this that it would have been like a week ago. Sadly I was mistaken, I sincerely hope this will drive you on to write another chapter. I am a story lover. I can sit down and read anything and really get into it but what really makes me happy is when I read a love variant of a story I already love so much. You made the relationship between Tenten chan and Naruto seem vary real and almost 'canon', and as much as I enjoy writing, to me reading others views on things is so much better. The amount of unpredictability in the novels. Its all just overwhelming. Again i sincerely hope you will continue writing even after more that 3 years.

Exeo Furzoli

p.s I know how hard it is to have perfect grammar/spelling, if you ever need help...
meta.V chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
I realy hope you could continue with this story cause it's the very first fic I ever turned into a naruten fan and your stories are the best...
jake00 chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
i have think i like the part with the two weapons masters in the third chapter the most.
jake00 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
This is the first time that I have read any of your stories I have to say you are way better at writing stories than whoever wrote naruto sex education and the one starring Anko Miterashi taking Iruka's place as Naruto's teacher and gets Naruto and Hinata together. I think I would like to try being your beta reader I'm very good at spelling and I have never passed a spelling test with anything lest than a 100 percent that I can remember but Im letting u know ahead of time that I have a little experience with writing stories but only long ones like chapter books at least a hundred pages long but usually more but I haven't had any of my stories published let alone let anyone read them and I am pretty good at editing and fixing things just tell me what u need me to do and I will do it im very interested. Please let me know
MarTinez9 chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Is there ever going to be an update of this story.
Gabriel177 chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
I'm a megafan of the Naruto and Tenten relationship!
Please please please write some more chapters to (The smell of love).
Lord Mortensen chapter 3 . 10/17/2013
Ey can you update this fanfic? I love this fanfic! you have 2 years without update
yugiohFan441 chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
if you can have hinata in this love story too
curlyfreak chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Really well written and well done story! Honestly you have a lot of great imagery and descriptions going on here with, what I think, are pretty spot on character portrayals. Also I really like the canon descriptions, since you're interweaving it all within your own story, without it being annoying like in a lot of other fanfics that just re-describe everything we've already read in the manga. Please do write another chapter I would love to see some of the conflict that will arise between the Hyuuga cousins and Naruto and Tenten.
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