|Reviews for His Greatest Wish|
| Scott Berg chapter 36 . 9/23
Great story so far. For all the time travel stories I've seen there's not many where Severus goes back to being eleven or where he gets resorted into Gryffindor. It's amazing seeing all the changes and new friendships that have come about from this even though Mark's death was very sad.
Loved Sev's gift to Liy with the necklace and Lily's Christmas gift to him even more, so thoughtful and clever and perfect. Love how much Severus cares about his friends and supports them, particularly Remus and how much happier Severus is. Love the suggestion of killing Voldemort with a bullet.
Just on Nymphadora Tonks, she graduates before Harry starts. I say this because having played Hogwarts Mystery the character you play is in the same year as her and it's a widely discussed fact that we graduate before Harrys starts and looking on the wiki it says she was born before September 1973 which means she woudl have attended 1984 - summer 1991 not September 1991 and finally because she's in the same year as Charlie Weasley who wasn't there when Harry started.
Anyway, that aside enjoying the story, looking forward to reading to the end
| Casey Nordal chapter 50 . 8/19
Loved this book SO much, i think it should be published! James and Umbridge deserved more than what they got! I like how the good characters who died or worse in JK Rowlings books/movie got their happy endings, again so good, thank you.
| Niko2.1 chapter 50 . 5/17
I love this story, I really enjoyed reading it.
| BANGTAN4EVER chapter 44 . 4/30
AGGHI HATE POTHEAD SO F-ING MUCH IF JKR BROUGHT HIM BACK AND DROWNED HIM I WOULD BE HAPPY THE BLOODY SON OF A BITCH
| BANGTAN4EVER chapter 39 . 4/30
I've read this before, and i really always think that it's a crossover before u mention it in the end of the chapter lol
| BANGTAN4EVER chapter 29 . 4/29
FINALLY OH MY GOD
| Guest chapter 50 . 3/8
Well, that's that, then. Final verdict: good story with some issues.
I'll be honest with you: as much as I dislike James Potter, I think he was never the kind of person to do what you had him do there at the end and I think it dragged this story down. That's spite, the worst kind of dislike, because it's coming up with a reason for why someone you dislike is reprehensible instead of disliking them because they did something you find reprehensible. It's not an admirable kind of writing and going by the quality of the rest of the story, I frankly think you could have done better than that.
| Guest chapter 47 . 3/8
Is it weird that I think that Carmichael would have worked better if she had been male? To really drive home the fact that sexual assault is something that no one is truly safe from, that it spares no one, and that every victim deserves to be treated as equal no matter their circumstances or personal disposition.
| Guest chapter 44 . 3/8
Solidly written depiction of trauma. I can see why some people wouldn't like to read it, but you kept it well within the bounds of good taste. My respect to you.
| Amaryllis chapter 50 . 9/2/2022
This is such beautiful fic and the epilogue in the form of news is very unique! well done
| lokislov3 chapter 50 . 8/28/2022
| gginsc chapter 50 . 8/23/2022
A very enjoyable story. I wish you told who killed James Henry, however.
| alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 1 . 8/2/2022
| Vickety chapter 50 . 7/30/2022
| The Wizarding Horcrux chapter 50 . 7/6/2022
This was a really wonderful story! I love this trope of Severus returning in time to deliberately do better. Oftentimes it just ends up as a fluffy (sometimes overly fluffy!) do-it-all over with everything begin a straight line to the Happily Ever After. This story wasn't like that. That's why I enjoyed it so! Nothing was perfect. That's what made this story very near perfect.
I admit that I was hesitant because of the summary (I am a diehard "One Good Slytherin" advocate, lol!), but this was WORTH IT.
Several years later, I enjoyed reading this immensely. Thank you for sharing!