Reviews for His Greatest Wish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful wedding! Thank you so much for so many sad and happy moments! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet Petunia would pay Remus a few Galleons for a Muggle version of Butterbeer that she could sell to other Muggles-if it's that good, there should be quite a few Muggles providing work for future dentists drinking the stuff. And yes, it's very sad that Mark won't be able to walk with his daughter down the aisle. That will hurt for a long time. The empty chair-totally right. (at the premiere of Good Omens, a chair was left for Terry Pratchett with his hat in it). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyday I’ve been looking forward to reading your lovely and exciting story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter ! Even if I reckon that a Patronus Charm at eleven is a bit too much but... well... I'm okay with that, Lily is not exactly incompetent |
![]() ![]() Wow - I want some of those Wizard Crackers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good story and I enjoyed reading about how everything changed and the friendships between Severus and all the others in the Circle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's too bad that Severus doesn't ever get counseling for what he's gone through, but alas, such is always the case. I am glad that Lily is going to get help, that will make his life a bit easier, too. So happy to see they will always be together, with the approval of family and friends. I wouldn't care to be on the other side of Lily during a Defense class, though, especially during the trial. But James Potter should have supervised parole, because if there's anything left of him after Azkaban, he'll be coming after Severus and Lily. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really good so far and I am enjoying reading about all the things that have changed as well as seeing all the familiar characters when they were younger. I look forward to reading more of this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Arthur and Molly, I look forward to reading more of this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really interesting so far and I look forward to seeing what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait to find out about Laura. |
![]() ![]() A WONDERFUL job with your characters! A pleasure to read- thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, nicely done! Henry Potter acted just the way he should. Dumbledore, eh-I hope Renly is careful with that Cloak and makes sure Dumbledore never gets his hands on it again. Lily should go to the center and get counseling (and frankly, Severus should get some too, but he won't). Umbridge should definitely be allowed to leave Britain-she'll only cause more trouble if she isn't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I binge read this in 2 days and it was amazing! Great job all the way through! |
![]() ![]() Lemme guess - James unPotter was offed by a thug named Vernon Dursley... Love this story! While I missed seeing Harry and Hermione, et al, in it, still, this is a great telling of how Severus got his Lily back! Well done! |