Reviews for His Greatest Wish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! Of course Lily's recovery is going to take a long time-it's too they don't have any counselors in the WW (though Severus would make an excellent one, he'd rather do Potions). And the longer James remains unconscious, the more likely he will stay that way. Still, authors like you have a way of surprising us... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a interesting, and very well written story. Thank you for writing it! I found it interesting how most of the Circle's 'archenemies' were taken out indirectly by them or not at all (excluding James ex-Potter). Rather appropriate, considering their ages. I greatly enjoyed the fact that Voldie was killed early in the story, that was a fun plot twist. And yes I have to ask, who killed James and how? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to let you know that I was re-reading this old favorite. I won't bother you with constant reviews of every chapter. But it's a rainy day treat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um...It's Fleamont Potter... By the way, absolutely superb story! I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the snily stories I've ever read before if you do a sequel awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said abraxas was Eileen's father not lucias |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I'm channeling plenty of hate for Potter! And Dumbledore, though at least he's not covering for Potter any more-granted, he knows that Snape will manage vengeance if he doesn't come up to the mark *this* time around. And if Albus didn't do enough about Potter this time, he could rightly be accused of placing the rights of the pureblooded over the Muggleborn. It doesn't get much more blatant than this. Though we also see where James Pottet got his arrogance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw Mycroft and thought you wouldn't... backtracked to see if I skipped over Sherlock saw that I didn't and read on and immediately saw Holmes. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness this is so cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Enjoyed it very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If James Potter is doing NEWT quizzing with the Prewetts, maybe he's figured out a way to put the Cloak back under locked and warded conditions, or faking an acceptable substitute. And I see by the end of the chapter that he's succeeded in doing all this without leaving any magical traces of his son (though if he did, they would be of the same family type as his father's, since he's the heir). Though I suspect his idea is going to go spectacularly wrong, because the Snape he is dealing with now has a lot more friends than Snape in canon. As for Umbridge and werewolves...well, I'm sure the corruption hearings will still go on, and not be made moot by disposing of the Werewolf Registry altogether. As for Greyback? Stun him, bind him...and then pull all of his teeth. I imagine there's a new set of dentists named Granger who are just starting up a practice. Love watching the Holmes family become involved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! love that severus relive his hogwart days and fall in love with lily! like circle of 7 friends |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly have no words upon finishing this story. From the beginning to the end, it was a romance that transcends time. The epilogue felt like the end of a movie were the camera is slowly panning over a table that had all those newspaper clippings assorted, which in my mind looked like they where about to go into an album. Kinda sad that the titular character, Harry, doesn't appear as Harry Prince. missed pun there, butt hay, not every prince can be hairy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The "taboo" trap is actually something I wondered about. I mean, they teleport (apperate or disapperate, what have you) to who ever says the taboo word. My only problem with that is,WHY THE HELL HASN'T IT OCCURRED TO ANYONE TO USE THAT AGAINST THEM?! I mean, bumbledore was supposed to be this wise old wizard who learned all manners of ancient magics, it absolutely baffles me that this is the first ff that used the disadvantage as an idea for an advantage. Jeebus. No fault of yours, as again, this ff is the first I've seen actually utilize this method. The taboo is a double edged sword if you think about it strategically, but then again Hermione always did question the logic of magicals. |