Reviews for His Greatest Wish
excessivelyperky chapter 42 . 9/9/2018
Revealing that Remus is a werewolf to Umbridge is doing to be *Dumbledore* in trouble, and Albus Dumbledore Will Not Be Pleased with James Potter when he finds out who wrote the letter, no matter how careful James was.

I may be letting down the side here, but I once had a room that was a very nice shade of pink, noted as "The Pepto-Bismol Room" and I liked it immensely. And I own a kitten plate. (blushes) But honest, it really doesn't mean I'm a horrible person...Umbridge manages that part all by herself.

That forgetfulness spell sounds like it's an Obliviate crossed with a Fideius.

Well, corruption charges may be enough to get rid of Umbridge for some time; but Albus knows *exactly* how protective Slughorn is of the Slytherins, and rather likes it that way. Both Reggie and Peggy are smart enough to pick up on that.

I'm surprised the Circle isn't more suspicious of James, myself. No doubt the other shoe will drop when James makes his 'subtle' blackmail attempt to get Lily to date him, or something.
Guest chapter 46 . 9/1/2018
Honestly, I'm disgusted with Henry Potter. What an utter coward. His sons actions are partly due to his utter failure as a father, and instead of trying to fix it and actually do his duty as a father, he disowns him so that he doesn't have to deal with the mess he's made. Pathetic.
Guest chapter 40 . 9/1/2018
I agree that what Potter did was unacceptable, but lols the sexism though.
Guest chapter 37 . 8/31/2018
I thought his canon name was Charles Potter
ThunderStruck012 chapter 31 . 8/12/2018
Damn was not expecting that. I was close, I guessed Petunia. Love the story so far. Can't wait to finish
lechatabbicat chapter 50 . 7/28/2018
Who did it? Lily or Sev? Marvelous story! Well done!
RobinsCrypt chapter 50 . 7/20/2018
This story was EPIC! I binged for 2 days reading this and I regret nothing. This made me feel so happy that Sev and Lily got a happy ending! I really want to know who killed james. Damn this story made me weak! I'm crying it was so good! Thanks for a wild adventure!
Peggy199 chapter 1 . 7/17/2018
I love this book so much you have no idea everything about it is just so awesome
PRETTY PINK chapter 50 . 7/12/2018
OMG.
Like OMG.
I have read this nonstop for three days. It was SO worth it! I loved this book, one of the top ten fanfictions I've ever read! I also loved Chapter 50, the epilogue. I appreciate how much hard work you put into this.
BAH I CAN't PRETEND TO BE FORMAL ANYMORE . I LOVED THIS BOOK YOU GIRL SURE KNOW HOW TO WRITE I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND JUST AAAAAGGGHHH
Poor James:( Don't you think maybe he deserves forgiveness? And why does Sev hate him so much? James is extremely immature, but he did, after all, sacrifice his life in the previous life.
Anyway I just wanna say YOU'RE SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER I HAD SO MUCH FUN READING THIS BOOK.
That is all;) #cul8rallig8r
Thora Jane chapter 2 . 7/8/2018
Oh my goodness! I totally am freaking out over the sorting hat song! I am so into your story. And the fact that the sorting hat knew was very surprising and interesting.
Wense chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
My heart bled for Severus when he got to hold the love of his life in his arms once more! That was beautiful *wipes tear away* Thank you for giving him this second chance at happiness
excessivelyperky chapter 41 . 5/30/2018
Delightful chapter, it looks like everything is going to work out well-here's hoping the werewolf families won't need sanctuary, but at least everything is ready if they do.

Lily and Sev are quite an item, and James should just give up, but he won't.
al2010 chapter 50 . 5/17/2018
Fantastic job on this story! It was so well written and detailed. I’ve never understood why Lily chose James in canon and it was so refreshing to see him portrayed as an antagonist. Thanks for the wonderful read!
Magnificent the Destroyer Lord chapter 3 . 5/15/2018
Y'know, I've always wondered what was up with the librarian being such Frow Blutcher *loud horse whinnies can be heard* ... ... *coughs loudly* on the students. It's like each book is a physical embodiment of sheer divinity not fit for the masses to desecrate with their mere presence... *shakes head*.

Also, I got this wonderful image in my head of Professor Dumbledore dissapointedly guilt tripping Severus over the need for DADA professor no. 68 to be acquired because he killed no. 67 in class... "I understand Prof. Hardgrave said to 'do your worst', but why did you feel he had to die?" Aaaand now I have Men in Black in my head... *shrugs* whoops?!

Good luck with whatever projects you're currently working on

M*T*D*L*
Aiyanna Clearwater chapter 50 . 4/25/2018
I've read this story a couple of times and I always shed tears throughout. I don't know if it's for the hardships that most of the characters experience or my inability to go back in time to right wrongs. I'm sure it's both. ;) Anyway, this remains one of the best stories I've ever read. Thanks.
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