| Reviews for His Greatest Wish |
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   Alytiger chapter 6 . 9/10/2016 Didn't inherent the nose... Don't do that! |
| Alytiger chapter 3 . 9/10/2016 Sev is going to be popular this time around. Amazing at Potions, showing off in DADA, and he's already amassing a group of friends. |
| Guest chapter 50 . 8/31/2016 Perfect story! I can't believe it's all over :(. Thank you for this story :) |
| Catharmel chapter 50 . 8/10/2016 Beautiful, really beautiful story. Thank you for writing it. The attempted rape scene felt so real; as much as I wish it wasn't in the story, it was very emotionally compelling. Severus becoming a Prince again was a nice touch; 'Lily Snape' doesn't sound half as good as 'Lily Prince'. |
| Amalthia chapter 50 . 7/27/2016 I loved your story! |
| IndigoPeregrine chapter 50 . 7/25/2016 I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I've never been a fan of the "marauders era" fiction but this was very well written and the characters delayed or nicely. I particularly like the relationship with Sirius and Regulas. Also the addition of Renly to the circle. Most of all I am glad that Severus didn't waste his second chance at happiness. |
| Ginnylove12 chapter 50 . 7/23/2016 I LOVE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUIL! I"M CRYING! |
| Guest chapter 50 . 7/2/2016 I fucking loved this. |
| Poppy chapter 1 . 6/30/2016 Second time i read this (i love it) *Dumbledore's wise words, actually, i think? I could be wrong lol Have a nice day! |
| leongmingyu chapter 30 . 6/22/2016 More fleshing out of the crouches and rosiers at the end would be good. And grace to the bad guys... Some redeemed? You are the author / you can do it! I can't! |
| leongmingyu chapter 50 . 6/22/2016 What did I miss that meant that james Henry potter was a rapist? All I recollected was a mild imperius curse?! |
| leongmingyu chapter 31 . 6/22/2016 So honourable! ;)) |
| HorsemanOTA chapter 50 . 6/22/2016 Thank you. This has been an amazing ride I loved all of it. Thank you for showing what James truly was: a glorified bully. Loved it from beginning to end. Its been an awesome ride thanks for the read i wish you well in life and in writing. Later Daze |
| Hektols chapter 50 . 6/21/2016 A very interesting time travel story. I specially liked Severus chosing to be a Gryphindor so he could stay at Lily's side and not lose her. Good work with Severus not scorning the not-Marauders for something they didn't do yet and giving them a chance, specially Severus encouraging Peter to stand by himself and to make a name of his own instead of turning into a sidekick, probably the reason he ended resenting the others in the original timeline. Also good thing to have the Dumbledore and the other adults dealing with Voldemort using the info from the future instead of having the time traveler doing everything himself. At first it looked a bit unethical to have Severus taking the merit of the Wolfsbane Potion but it would have been worse to keep it secret while people suffered because it was not supposed to be available until the original inventor created it. Besides, Severus created an improved version, not the same potion. About James becoming bad, well, he was a school bully in canon, an underage criminal; yes, a criminal, if a bully as an adult tries to do to other adults what he did at school he is arrested and ends facing criminal charges. With that fact in mind is not so hard to think that he could have turned like that without his friends and not getting Lily. I think that he turned into a better person in canon due to Lily's influence and to be force to face an evil like Voldemort's, something that didn't happen in this story. |
| deleted-account898987 chapter 50 . 6/19/2016 Yay! I loved this story! I couldn't believe how awesome this was! Anyways, who killed the bastard? Please tell me it was a certain Prince? |