Reviews for His Greatest Wish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Incredibly well done. This is the first story with James bashing that was designed credibly. Thank you for finishing this. |
![]() ![]() I liked it! Very good idea! I liked the newspaper clipping ending, it is a good way to end. Good job, and thank you for sharing :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it! It was avoid idea, very creative! It had its ups and downs but was generally good. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really good story, thank you for sharing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good, I look forward to reading more of your work. |
![]() ![]() I. LOVE. This! |
![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVE this fic! |
![]() ![]() OH MY EFFING GOD. How DARE he? I can't BELIEVE James would try to rape Lily! I'm going to wring his sorry neck! He dares to wake up after yonks and blatently LIE to his parents face about Lily? That lying cheating no good fucking bastard! Argh, I'm going to KILL him! I'm with you all the way, Severus. |
![]() ![]() I wonder what this is like from Snape's, or Prince's pov. I mean, he's kinda technically decades older than Lily. |
![]() ![]() Ummm... Can you say 'yeah!'? |
![]() ![]() Oh, dear. Everything's so perfect, you just know something's going to go wrong. ); |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, I just read 40 chapters in less than 12hours, I love lily and Severus, and at the same time that I'm sad that I only have 10chapters left, I'm so in love with the story that I can't wait to keep reading! I love this fanfiction so much. |
![]() ![]() Your story has developed a sarcastic edge to it, which tops off the story perfectly. |
![]() ![]() Yeah, don't get me wrong, I love this fanfiction, but I didn't think much of that kiss, cause I'm a lesbian, and, honestly, this is the first hetro fanfiction I've ever read. |
![]() ![]() Yes! I found someone who understands how I feel! Thank you- I hate James! (And Harry for that matter. Seriously, if Hogwarts has anger management classes, he should be first to sign up ) ps- I'm the one who wrote a few chapters back for you to break James's heart, for the same reasons. I totally love your story! 3 |