Reviews for His Greatest Wish
envirosue chapter 50 . 5/7/2016
Incredibly well done. This is the first story with James bashing that was designed credibly. Thank you for finishing this.
Guest chapter 50 . 4/15/2016
I liked it! Very good idea! I liked the newspaper clipping ending, it is a good way to end. Good job, and thank you for sharing :-)
Honestly don't you two read chapter 50 . 4/15/2016
I liked it! It was avoid idea, very creative! It had its ups and downs but was generally good. Good job!
DarkViolet7258 chapter 50 . 4/15/2016
It was really good story, thank you for sharing it
Lena Nox chapter 50 . 4/10/2016
This was good, I look forward to reading more of your work.
NatNicole chapter 50 . 4/8/2016
I. LOVE. This!
NatNicole chapter 27 . 4/5/2016
I absolutely LOVE this fic!
Lola13 chapter 46 . 4/3/2016
OH MY EFFING GOD. How DARE he? I can't BELIEVE James would try to rape Lily! I'm going to wring his sorry neck! He dares to wake up after yonks and blatently LIE to his parents face about Lily? That lying cheating no good fucking bastard! Argh, I'm going to KILL him! I'm with you all the way, Severus.
Guest chapter 35 . 3/23/2016
I wonder what this is like from Snape's, or Prince's pov. I mean, he's kinda technically decades older than Lily.
Guest chapter 34 . 3/23/2016
Ummm... Can you say 'yeah!'?
Guest chapter 33 . 3/23/2016
Oh, dear. Everything's so perfect, you just know something's going to go wrong. );
blacksistrs chapter 40 . 3/25/2016
Omg, I just read 40 chapters in less than 12hours, I love lily and Severus, and at the same time that I'm sad that I only have 10chapters left, I'm so in love with the story that I can't wait to keep reading! I love this fanfiction so much.
Guest chapter 30 . 3/22/2016
Your story has developed a sarcastic edge to it, which tops off the story perfectly.
Guest chapter 29 . 3/22/2016
Yeah, don't get me wrong, I love this fanfiction, but I didn't think much of that kiss, cause I'm a lesbian, and, honestly, this is the first hetro fanfiction I've ever read.
Guest chapter 27 . 3/22/2016
Yes! I found someone who understands how I feel! Thank you- I hate James! (And Harry for that matter. Seriously, if Hogwarts has anger management classes, he should be first to sign up ) ps- I'm the one who wrote a few chapters back for you to break James's heart, for the same reasons. I totally love your story! 3
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