Reviews for His Greatest Wish |
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![]() ![]() ![]() everyone changes |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Frank and Sev will be good friends |
![]() ![]() ![]() you don't have problems with Sirius sort into Gryffindor. James. why do you have problems with Sev |
![]() ![]() ![]() cherish your second chance,Sev |
![]() ![]() Ty |
![]() ![]() Vt |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful story that i couldn‘t help but binge read within 5 days. Wonderfully written characters are always a joy to read. And a big thank you for sharing this piece of work. Inspired me to try out my own one day (maybe). All the luck to you, your book and the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought you were being ambigious with wording every time lily remarks anything pertaining to Sev when he lies. It seems i was wrong |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can‘t help but think lily also returned in time |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best Severus and Lily fanfic I've ever read. I've lost count of how many times I've reread it |
![]() ![]() ![]() honestly I think her was a doe because of James and Severus was because of hers with that reasoning hers would no longer have that form |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've enjoyed the story so far, and the James bashing makes sense in context. But I really wish they were punishing James for bullying Peter and not freaking out about him hitting Lily back after she slapped him. I'm pretty sure the punishment wouldn't have been so severe if it had been one of the boys hitting James and getting punched. They barely even pay attention to what he did to Peter at all. As if him hitting Lily was the bad thing instead of the only justifiable thing. |
![]() ![]() I loved this book so much and think it should be a real book because it was SO GOOD and I hated James before reading this book so I ask you because I don’t know how to dm someone, who killed James Henry (potter)? |
![]() ![]() Ty |
![]() ![]() ![]() broo who killed james? |