|Reviews for A Fatal Match|
| morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
well...yeah...think i'll go find some fluff now :) glad it was a one shot..don't think i could handle a long story of this. good job though :)
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
holy f*cked up! wow...crazy, well written, though! lol
| OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Damn, that was unexpected...but damn if I wouldn't read a story that told everything leading up to this. great job ladies!
| twilightobsessed40873a chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
That was awesome. And I also didn't see him killing her coming either.
| Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
WOW! thanks for sharing this amazing piece! Yeah ummm! Bit of an eye opener and she knew what Edward was like but she kept at him! unitl he just snapped! Very well written! Scary but unfortunatly it does happen! See you next time :o) Chilly x
| fourbrats chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Very well written but I have to say that I did not like this one shot as I am a Edward and Bella fan all the way. Just thought I would give it a try since I like some of your other stuff. You are a great writer and it is not like you didn't worn me with the angst/tradegy warning so it is my own damn fault that I feel sick to my stomache. LOL
| AClumsyBrunetteBrownEyedGirl chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Not what i was expecting :) very good , thanks for writing and sharing it :)
| emmzac chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
I don't like that Edward at all and Bella and Em are not better. Strong story line..
| edwardxbellatogetherforever chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Holy shit! This was crazy! I never thought he would kill her!
From your summary, I was thinking that the affair with Emmett was just a rumour, you know. But I guess it was true! Edward should have remembered the rule: once a cheater, always a cheater! P I guess that can apply to women too! :)
Poor Edward. He is a little crazy though. But he didn't deserve what Bella did. though she didn't deserve to be strangled either.
Well.. anyways.. This was good. Thanks for sharing! :)
| KNG1986 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Bella must have had a death with telling Edward the truth when he was so angry and looks like she got her wish. At least he had the decency to take his own life after he killed her. I loved Jacob but hopefully Emmett will have a long hard time getting over his guilt. Good "match" to the banner.
| E's My Brand Of Heroin chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Whew! Not what I was expecting. Especially when you said rumor, I thought maybe he had it wrong. So, not into the hea, huh? Lol
| don'tcallmeLeeLee chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
First of all, I wanted to thank you for participating in our new contest.
I really enjoyed reading this one-shot. Dark, intense…but what I liked the most about it was that no matter how much Edward hated Bella for doing what she's done, he still decided to end his life next to hers.
I’m also impressed with the idea. I saw the banner you picked and I would have never imagined what to write about, so congratulations.
Very well done! Remember the voting starts tomorrow. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me or contact us at FWC’s email (see it on the blog). Good luck!
Stella, FWC's admin.
| InspiredByLemons chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Phew! That is one Angryward! I almost expected Bella to tell him that she and Emmett were meeting about something else entirely, but then she had to go and blurt it all out.
Shame they couldn't get him to some anger-management courses...
| Fen29 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
WOW! That clearly is something different from the both of you.
It was really good, but now get back to the fluff stuff please. :D
| Bree73 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Dude, WTF was that? Omg! I think I just had a heart attack & not in a good way! Shit. Great writing, but damn !