Reviews for Fragmented Essence
Draco711 chapter 2 . 8/9/2017
Continue. Story, awesome.
JJ chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
This is awesome.
I'm a bit bummed that this was written a long time ago and not updated since.
I hope you update this soon.
Jai chapter 2 . 6/10/2014
I love this story. Please update soon.
It's awesome.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
why you no update please
pucflek chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Hey will you continue in this. it isnt bad.
BigD64 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
you put my two favorite things fariy tail and elder scrolls and that is just simply epic
Brilliantteazer chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
Interesting story! Sure hope you will continue it.
warrior of six blades chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
Nice job on these two chapters.I look forward to the next chapter that comes out for this story.
Avisen chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
great as ever cant wait for the next chapter
CreateElements chapter 2 . 12/22/2010
Got a little World of Warcraft going on there, I like it :D
ihavenoname23 chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
WEW! warcraft
The Wumbologist chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
Yay Warcraft 3!

As for your fic, I adore NatsuxErza and I'm glad you're writing one, but this fic needs some work.

Your sentences either run on or have too much information coming too quickly. Add more sentences and don't comma splice so much. Also, watch your spelling and grammar.

Overall the events of this fic feel rushed in my opinion. You should slow things down and explain in more detail.

I do like how you separate the events by location though, keep that up.

I'll be waiting for the next chapters of your fic, I hope you improve and keep writing!
Age-Persona chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
such a great story

ersa x natsu couple luv

fullmetal alchemist twist is interesting


i think zeref is natsu biological father

unlike adopted father the dragon igneel
Iophiel chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
What a great story. I realy like ErzaNatsu pairing. I hope you update soon. Good luck with the story!
Avisen chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
ypu have to finish this story its fantasitc
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