Reviews for 4's Abduction
Girl Supersonicboy chapter 9 . 1/28/2013
Good CHPTR, keep going with the great ideas.
Demon Llama Nerd chapter 8 . 7/3/2012
Cool! And you're right about writing fight scenes.

Please continue!
PoppyECM.6-13 chapter 8 . 10/21/2011
i read this on deviant art! you are epic! can you post more of it on here? also thanks for doing the first parts in writing coz i couldn't figure out the comics on DA (and i didn't have time to find them when you told me it was set out like manga) your epic !
nothanksnuhuhno chapter 8 . 9/3/2011

Please, please, please continue!
Jirachi Girl chapter 7 . 5/16/2011
This story is simply amazing!Here's how I'd describe it in three words;


I love this so much!MORE!MORE!MORE!
SuperTwitchyMouse chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
wait iSN'T 4 and 3 male?
SoraLuvr chapter 5 . 3/21/2011
nothanksnuhuhno chapter 3 . 2/1/2011
Oops...*blush* a little late, but im here. It always interests me about the twins and how they were created. Because you can see some stitching on them in the movie which suggests that they were joined at the hip or something. Very good, and hopefully i will be back sooner rather than later this time ;)
xXBWFXx chapter 2 . 1/11/2011

Oh noes! D: Oh well, I hope they'll be okay~

Nice story, by the way. :3
Pale18 chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
How suspenseful! Hope you update soon! _
Pale18 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Please update! I think this is a very interesting and entertaining start! :D
nothanksnuhuhno chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
:O OH NOES! 4! oh well she'll be fine... At least I hope so. I'll be back to read and review chap 2 :)