Reviews for Congenital Insensitivity
BeccaH -BoOk LuVeR chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I liked thatbut wish it was longer!
Evgenia chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
This was really good.
Silent Movements chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Wow... Nice plot you got there, one of the best oneshot I read.
SeaChick chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Aww! Hmm I wonder isle he really can't feel anything...
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Brilliant. )
xXxrouxXx chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
made me want to cry im actually sniffing :-DD luv it
DustyPhoenix chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
A very sweet sensitive story, I loved it1
MelRose520 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
That was sweet. I loved it!
Author in my Heart chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Wow. That was amazing. I loved it.
don'ttrysohardtosaygoodbye chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Okay, well...

I liked it!

But...I didn't like the way the story was written-the format. I didn't really like all the lines, but I think that's what makes the story unique-the story is broken up into thoughts and choppy (kind of) sentences.

Good job overall!

And there was something missing throughout the piece, and I'm not sure what it was. Maybe the solid element of the story...Is it just a drabble?