|Reviews for Predator|
| raggedyman01 chapter 6 . 6/20
Great. Same calibre I've come to expect of you. Liked the lemon.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/24
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1
Holy shiz fockles, that was more intense than JUST smut.
| Dra.K-Doof chapter 1 . 3/22
I haven't read something from you in a long time (which is okay because I didn't come here to write you about how I feel about your incomplete Jori fanfics) In fact, I was wondering if it possible that you could give a permission to translate this fanfic to Spanish? It would be a pleasure for me to do it...
| Writerforlife1235 chapter 6 . 2/8
This is one of the best Jori fanfictions that I have ever read and the ending was just mindblowing. Great job.
| ClarissaAdeleFray chapter 6 . 1/23
I have to agree with you here Abe. I don't usually like stories that have open endings like this, but it seemed like the perfect place to end. We all know that whatever happens in the future, they will eventually end up together.
| ClarissaAdeleFray chapter 3 . 1/23
This is seriously one of the longest sex scenes I've read, not that I'm complaining. But I love that this has a plot to and their sex was filled with raw emotion. I hope you keep writing, you are a great contribution to the fandom.
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/15/2015
| RedEsmerald chapter 6 . 11/9/2015
This is one of the best Jori fics I have ever read here. i love how you keep the personalities just like in the show and the last sentence in this chapter was the perfect ending.
| LenyRehim chapter 6 . 8/17/2015
Magnifico, no tengo más palabras para describir esta historia.. Me hubiera gustado ver al menos el punto de vista de Jade
| Justine chapter 6 . 4/4/2015
Can you write more tori and jade please, you are the best author who wrote all the best Jori fic in this fandom so please I hope you can write more multi chapter fic
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2015
fuck, this was amazing... no words, just... are you sure your name is not Scarlett Paulson? You know, my girlfriend... this is basically the story of how we got together... creepy
| Samuraipsycho77 chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
God I love this story
| Cassie chapter 6 . 7/4/2014
this is probably my favorite smut fic. It was beautiful and perfect and so emotional and GAH. great job!
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
Not everything in life has or will have a label...
Life is fluid, like the tapestry of time it shalt forever continue, It shalt...
Wither under the gaze of sadness, yet glow under the amorous moonlight, It shalt...
Prosper under adversity, always singing in anticipation, it shalt..
Stare upon death, meeting Death as a true equal, worthy for none other...
Life is precious, life is melody, like is healing, life is pain, life is a lot of things...
But one thing that is above all else is that life is worth living...
To experience the emotions, to experience the winter chill caressing your skin...
Evert breathe you breath can be your last, live for the now, never the after...
Consequences are imminent yet are not the end...
One does not have to be a soldier to fight, one does not have to take life to protect...
All humans are born warriors, we war among our hearts and minds...
And honestly I do believe you manage to convey everything I have said in your magnificent story...