|Reviews for Predator|
| Justine chapter 6 . 4/4
Can you write more tori and jade please, you are the best author who wrote all the best Jori fic in this fandom so please I hope you can write more multi chapter fic
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/27
fuck, this was amazing... no words, just... are you sure your name is not Scarlett Paulson? You know, my girlfriend... this is basically the story of how we got together... creepy
| Samuraipsycho77 chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
God I love this story
| Cassie chapter 6 . 7/4/2014
this is probably my favorite smut fic. It was beautiful and perfect and so emotional and GAH. great job!
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
Not everything in life has or will have a label...
Life is fluid, like the tapestry of time it shalt forever continue, It shalt...
Wither under the gaze of sadness, yet glow under the amorous moonlight, It shalt...
Prosper under adversity, always singing in anticipation, it shalt..
Stare upon death, meeting Death as a true equal, worthy for none other...
Life is precious, life is melody, like is healing, life is pain, life is a lot of things...
But one thing that is above all else is that life is worth living...
To experience the emotions, to experience the winter chill caressing your skin...
Evert breathe you breath can be your last, live for the now, never the after...
Consequences are imminent yet are not the end...
One does not have to be a soldier to fight, one does not have to take life to protect...
All humans are born warriors, we war among our hearts and minds...
And honestly I do believe you manage to convey everything I have said in your magnificent story...
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/7/2014
I would love to see Jade's point of view for this story.
| Nayas-Wankys chapter 6 . 1/18/2014
Wow this story is amazing and wow just read it in one day like jksdfhsadjfa SO GOOD!
| eros hanshin chapter 6 . 12/28/2013
This fic brought me in another space...amazing. ..
| doingsomeliving chapter 6 . 12/8/2013
| blancoroja chapter 6 . 9/22/2013
oh wow, what a beautiful story. I really admire how well you can balance sex and emotion, and such gorgeous language. you really have a gift with words. I love your Jori like there's no tomorrow, although when I watched Victorious, I never thought about Jori BUT NOW I DO. ALL THANKS TO YOU.
| riskeybusiness chapter 6 . 8/8/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
car sex is fun but sorta uncomfortable... I've only done it a few times with my girlfriend but it gets to warm
| Jorilover chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
Make sure she gets with jade awesome! DONT STOP money maker yeaaahhh!$$$$$$$$$$
| LlamasInPajamas chapter 6 . 5/14/2013
This story was amazing! Romantic, hot, sweet... Just all the great things you want to find in a story. The only thing I'm disappointed about is it being over.
| RedNoseReeindder chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
dude i dont know how the hell you did that, like you did a short version of a big FanFic and didnt cutted the important parts , congratulations , and i loved it ;D