|Reviews for Like Fireworks On The Forth Of July|
| Serene Cullen chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
I like it alot but i wish we could have seen him yell at Tori
| encyclopediagallifrey chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Bit wierd but I loved it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Fucking hell. Stop using caps and bold! It looks unprofessional and messy.
This was really bad. I don't even know. Some of your stuff-it repeats, and it probably takes you ten minutes to write.
How many times do people have to tell you to practice? It's fucking annoying that you completely disregard it.
| seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
It's perfectly fine to dislike Tori and to use her as an antagonist in the story. But please do everyone a favor and try to keep her in-character while doing so.
And I refuse to believe that Beck would compare Tori to a skunk. It just. Just - no.
| sfbxfcb chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
| Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 12/12/2010