|Reviews for Runaway Prologue|
| Madame Apathy chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
This is ok, but I'm not really sure what it has to do with the book. This would probably be best off on FictionPress, which is 's sister site for original fiction. The web address is .com and the site functions very much like .
Anyway, moving on to the story. You've done quite well in establishing your character's personality. Kayleigh is clearly a determined, headstrong girl, and I like the fact that her friends realise she's being silly. If you choose to continue this, I think it will turn out very well.