Reviews for Monster
Guest chapter 53 . 6/20/2022
I’m disappointed in this story
Fairy King Oberon chapter 10 . 7/19/2020
so much for learning to fight. apparently she's useless in a fight unless she has the element of surprise. I'm actually pretty disappointed.
Xelatose chapter 1 . 5/15/2020
Ah, yes.
I start reading because I'm interested. I see "this will not be pretty". Then I see the main character's name is the same as mine
haha I'm in danger oh boy I'm ready
Lharman2020 chapter 23 . 6/14/2019
This book is really good, but I am so impatient to see when the oc and Emmett meet. You’re just leaving us hanging and I hate/love it
sister-tattoo chapter 7 . 9/9/2018
Great chapter.
Bennett4life chapter 18 . 6/24/2018
oh. nm
Bennett4life chapter 17 . 6/23/2018
ssssssooooooooo im confused. why the heck are they not questioning where she has been during her time of being tortured?
Bennett4life chapter 16 . 6/23/2018
no no no no no no no no no no no! why spiders?! why not snakes?! aaaaaahhhhhhh!
Guest chapter 68 . 9/12/2017
Damn.
Guest chapter 68 . 6/29/2017
I wish there could be more...I still dream about it. Brilliant, raw, thrilling..

By the way, this fic blew up on Quote and I've seen it on other sites. I hope it's your doing,
musicalflowerdress17 chapter 2 . 1/29/2017
once i was seven years old...

yes i am ashamed but it needed to be said

or is it sung?

imma stop now
KaiKaiRee chapter 17 . 1/24/2017
... WHAAAAAAAT!? YOUR NOW EVEN GOING TO HEAVE HER PACK FU*KING ADDRESS WHAT HAPPENED TO HER FOR THE LAST TWO MONTHS! I'M ACTUALLY VERY PISSED OFF RIGHT NOW! YOU DON'T PUT HER UNDER THAT MUCH TRAUMA AND NOT FU*KING ADDRESS THAT! THAT'S BULL SH*T!
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...btw this story is very well written.
Don't get me wrong, I'm still pissed at you for not having the pack address her torture. They share their minds for gods sake! They should have immediately sought revenge against those mother fu*kers who bathed her in fu*king SPIDERS!
FU*K!
*Throws hands up simply because I CAN'T HANDLE IT*
Kittyy w chapter 17 . 10/10/2016
I was with your story, totally rooting for your STRONG female character. You're an amazing writer seriously, but you have all this heavy stuff going on, from torture to murder to death and violence and you go right past it. Your character ruminates upon it for like three seconds then she's okay again. There's a lot of room for an emotional, stomach hurts can't stop crying element in your story but you don't give your character enough time to digest what happened before she's fine and angry again. And that would have been awesome I guess, except her pack mates know about what she went through and they're all blase about it. They're Like bye Felicia.

And maybe you've improved this story or your writing..but that was just my take on it.
Ahsilaa chapter 11 . 9/11/2016
Ok so I got very very confused. Didn't she have training for fighting? Why didn't she just do to Eli what she did to the gang thugs?
Anon chapter 52 . 2/10/2016
Nicole doesn't deserve to lead the pack. She's a bitch and she most certainly doesn't deserve Jacob or anything good.
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