Reviews for Monster |
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![]() ![]() I’m disappointed in this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() so much for learning to fight. apparently she's useless in a fight unless she has the element of surprise. I'm actually pretty disappointed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, yes. I start reading because I'm interested. I see "this will not be pretty". Then I see the main character's name is the same as mine haha I'm in danger oh boy I'm ready |
![]() ![]() ![]() This book is really good, but I am so impatient to see when the oc and Emmett meet. You’re just leaving us hanging and I hate/love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh. nm |
![]() ![]() ![]() ssssssooooooooo im confused. why the heck are they not questioning where she has been during her time of being tortured? |
![]() ![]() ![]() no no no no no no no no no no no! why spiders?! why not snakes?! aaaaaahhhhhhh! |
![]() ![]() Damn. |
![]() ![]() I wish there could be more...I still dream about it. Brilliant, raw, thrilling.. By the way, this fic blew up on Quote and I've seen it on other sites. I hope it's your doing, |
![]() ![]() ![]() once i was seven years old... yes i am ashamed but it needed to be said or is it sung? imma stop now |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... WHAAAAAAAT!? YOUR NOW EVEN GOING TO HEAVE HER PACK FU*KING ADDRESS WHAT HAPPENED TO HER FOR THE LAST TWO MONTHS! I'M ACTUALLY VERY PISSED OFF RIGHT NOW! YOU DON'T PUT HER UNDER THAT MUCH TRAUMA AND NOT FU*KING ADDRESS THAT! THAT'S BULL SH*T! ... ... ... ...btw this story is very well written. Don't get me wrong, I'm still pissed at you for not having the pack address her torture. They share their minds for gods sake! They should have immediately sought revenge against those mother fu*kers who bathed her in fu*king SPIDERS! FU*K! *Throws hands up simply because I CAN'T HANDLE IT* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was with your story, totally rooting for your STRONG female character. You're an amazing writer seriously, but you have all this heavy stuff going on, from torture to murder to death and violence and you go right past it. Your character ruminates upon it for like three seconds then she's okay again. There's a lot of room for an emotional, stomach hurts can't stop crying element in your story but you don't give your character enough time to digest what happened before she's fine and angry again. And that would have been awesome I guess, except her pack mates know about what she went through and they're all blase about it. They're Like bye Felicia. And maybe you've improved this story or your writing..but that was just my take on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so I got very very confused. Didn't she have training for fighting? Why didn't she just do to Eli what she did to the gang thugs? |
![]() ![]() Nicole doesn't deserve to lead the pack. She's a bitch and she most certainly doesn't deserve Jacob or anything good. |