Reviews for Helen's Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, beautifully written, very powerful piece. Lovely - in an angsty way :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! *squeals* a fic after my own heart! I love how you've used the language to set the tone, as if Helen or John is narrating. You've also done it in a way that isn't overdramatic - it's believable. Oooh that was so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written, it really captures how torn Helen is in her feelings for John. An exceptional first Sanctuary fic! ;) Plus, I love the vocabulary (just a non-native's PoV) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, OOH it's cold here, REALLY cold! But at least your update/story was a nice treat. *Grins happily* Nice work, I really enjoyed it a lot so please keep it up. Melissa |