Ooh, beautifully written, very powerful piece.

Lovely - in an angsty way :)

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! *squeals* a fic after my own heart! I love how you've used the language to set the tone, as if Helen or John is narrating. You've also done it in a way that isn't overdramatic - it's believable.

Oooh that was so good!

Very well written, it really captures how torn Helen is in her feelings for John. An exceptional first Sanctuary fic! ;) Plus, I love the vocabulary (just a non-native's PoV) :)

Hey there,

OOH it's cold here, REALLY cold! But at least your update/story was a nice treat. *Grins happily*

Nice work, I really enjoyed it a lot so please keep it up.

Melissa