Reviews for The Plan - OUTTAKES
EdwardsSnack chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Why was this story removed? The out takes look great. I'd love to read the whole story
gobert chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Still one of my favs!
Savage havoc chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Can some one please send me a copy of the complete story I have read the beginning and I love it.
viktorfanta chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
This is such a good story! From the numerous stories I've read so far, this is one of the best. I like Bella's attitude so much. I would love to read the whole story! Too bad you removed it...
maphie chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Someone from TFMU in Chicago shared the Completed version with me. I love love love it! Hilarious and clever Bella! I want to be her.
Mingleberry chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I think your story is not bad, it's just not everyone's cup of tea. Anne franks diary is world renowned but its not mine. Good effort your writing is good, it's just a very tough style. Sorry to hear you got so much flack for it, fandom is a tough place to write. However, it will stretch you the most!
Christy53 chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Can some one please send me a copy of this story! Please :-)
akshita.todi chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
hey! can anyone please send a copy of this fic to me? I've read the first few chapters and would love to continue with the story. thanks. :)
Cullenlover01 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Can anyone send me this please! I was hoping it would be reposted!
pinkimanae20 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I was very intrigued by this summary given to me by a friend. Is there any way you would be willing to send me the story for my eyes only? Please let me know either way. Thank you! :)
kk55 chapter 3 . 4/22/2013
I really loved this story...i wish it was still here so i can reread it. Hope maybe you'll repost it one day.
Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I read this very long time ago, it was a hot story, however, I could never understand why any woman would want to be with a creep like Edward Cullen, who was such a prick. He was hot, no question about that, he seemed to be very exciting sexually, but I he was such a bastard. I got some of the Edwards who are bastards with a history, read a lot of them, Asleep, Snowstorm, even the even the Edwards who are into BDSM, seemed to have tragic histories that contribute to their hositility, their anti-social behavior. But this guy seems to be a bastard just because he can be. I'm the boss, if you don't like working for me, fuck off, don't let the door hit your butt when you leave. As I said, it was a well-written, but seems that she is a bit of a masochist, and not in the way a of a submissive. Is hot sex with a hot man really worth a skanky personality? I guess on she knows the answer.
aelita48 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
It is always good and fun to read Bella's thoughts.
aelita48 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I love this chapter.
Loved this outtake.
SweetNonsense chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
It's a shame the trolls ruined a awesome story which a great deal of people enjoyed.

If copies of the full story is available please let me know (:
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