|Reviews for Rain|
| Mia chapter 1 . 3/13
I literally can't tell that it's your first lemon. Everything was so well written, even the non-lemony bits haha!
| Logan M chapter 1 . 2/9
That was a very well written and well thought out stories! It's the best I have read about EdWin!
| aows chapter 1 . 2/6
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/30
| Moonwolf032199 chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Great job I enjoyed it I'm a serious fullmetal fan and I like it if u can... if you can, do another one more hotter and with more detailed.
| fullbuster chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
fantastic story. one of the best ive read in a while.
| seireidoragon chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Oh my gosh this was a great story!
| Fuzzy Keldeo chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
shh im so naughty reading this
i love it
| Renae-Bookworm chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Wow! First...nice dude...nice...this was awesome...major nosebleed!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
This is the best FMA lemon I've read. It's not rapey, it builds up the anticipation just right, it's really hot, and aside from a couple typos, it's well written. It's also pretty believable; this works as an epilogue for sure.
| Finkie chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
This is amazing and extremely well written. One of my favourite Ed/Winry fics.
| Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
I loved this fic! It was great and so sexy! I always love me some EdWin smut :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Loved it! Write more !
| winryRocknell1 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Think it was, great and very romantic3
| Lily chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
That was too cute and sweet I loved it!