Reviews for Robin
dramaqueen101 chapter 21 . 7/10/2012
YOU WROTE ANOTHER CHAPTER! O.O YAY! By the way, plot-less mini-chapters are fine, but a tip for the whole "main plot" thing: just think of somewhere you want the climax to be and work your way back from there. That's what I do, and it seems to work okay. I'm glad you haven't completely given up on the story or anything, though. Your writing is really good, unlike a lot of the people on this website. Keep up the good work! Oh, and UPDATE AGAIN SOON! Even if it's another totally pointless filler chapter. :D
dramaqueen101 chapter 20 . 8/17/2011
YAY! you've finally updated! For coming up with ideas, its a start. :)
dramaqueen101 chapter 19 . 6/2/2011
Ah! So THAT'S what you've been doing...
Sun E. Day chapter 18 . 5/19/2011
good chapter! Yay, Rebel's in it. Thanks!
xxSurfingDreamsxx chapter 19 . 4/27/2011
heck could you do that? you know when i finally got my computer privs back and saw that...that...THING! i almost destroyed the computr! can you imagin the agony of having to pay for that, be grounded(again), and not know you said APRIL FOOLS AT THE END! I mean its my brothers birthday on april fools, i should get some slack too...right. anyway you gave me a heartattack, i congratulate you. i think it was well deserved. anyway, if this isn't really an april fools joke i think i just might hide because of my ultimate stupidity. welll then again...shut up self...sorry once again mountain dew has found its way into my system so now i m hyper, and talk to than usual you mean) write soon

-RIP Andy Irons-
dramaqueen101 chapter 19 . 4/1/2011
Star.Light.Star.Bright897 chapter 19 . 4/1/2011
The moment i started reading i knew it was april fools. I've been plying pranks on everyone. So has my teachers!
Star.Light.Star.Bright897 chapter 18 . 4/1/2011
Yes! New chapter so soon! Anyway, update soon and thats it.
Sun E. Day chapter 17 . 3/31/2011
Good Story so far...Update soon.

Here's a character for David.

Name: Rebel (Bell)

Age: 13

Gender: female

DNA mutation: 2% magpie 98% human (Black wings with white tips)

Powers: She can make her footsteps silent.

Hair Color: dark brown (Almost black)

Eye Color: dark brown (Almost black)

Skin Color: very tan

Romance: Sure

Likes: shiny things, stealing, wide open spaces, flying, colorful things, her sister, drawing, painting, running, and fire

Dislikes: elevators, small spaces, not being able to breathe, being the center of attention, water, the color pink and the color white

Fears/Weakness: small spaces, nets, water, needles

Personality: She is kind of a quiet girl who is devoted to her sister. She loves to fly and agrees to kill Robin not only to prtect her sister, but so she can see the world. She is artsy and loves to draw, no matter where she is. She likes fire too adn finds it facinating. Most of her artwork is of nature and fire. She puts on a sarcastic, tough, nothing-can-hurt me mask when setting out with DAvid, but inside she is a sensible girl who is intelligent.

History: grew up in a lab with her baby sister, Esther, and agreed to kill Robin adn his buddies to protect her.
xxSurfingDreamsxx chapter 17 . 3/30/2011
Name:Fletcher(Fletch)*David's side 4 now i guess*

Age:year older than his sister(flicker)meaning he's 17

Dna:4%harris' hawk and 3% timber wolf(pretty much oposite of his feline avian half sister)

Wings:dark brown with red edges and tinted red primaries

Powers:geothermal manipulation(can control magma lava(basically fire but not quite)

personality:generally quiet and defiant, he holds grudges and has a decent sense of humor. loyal but he doesnt like being seperated from 'family'. he likes fair fights, easily trusted. agressive, tough, calm, he has a decent poker face but most times cant help but show

Appearance:has tattoo on his upper arm of a black phoenix. dark tanned skin. prominent muscles. He has dark oak brown hair. his eyes are a forest green with gold and brown flecks in them. crooked nose, light weight. (he cant morph just one part of his body, he can only morph into a dark brown wolf with a black tipped tail) top of his right ear is gone, scars everywhere(similar to his sisters, they both have scars across their knuckles and arms)

History:was born from a wolf avian and an avian hybrid. he was trained w/ his sister(flicker) to be an assassin but later was transfered to the infiltration branch(spy). he didn't take the seperation from his sister well, he became closed off and cold.

fav color:dark green and silver

fav sport: like his sister racing ,surfing

cas clothes:jeans, basketball shorts, vans, black hemp bracelet with a metal star on it(got from sister). short sleeved shirts and dark green jackets or t shirts

strenghts: planner, and escape artist, and taking orders. Running, and fighting. He is good at calming others downfear of messing up, berserker, trusting, doesn’t pay attention to many ppl., not good at hiding, slower in close quarters(for fighting), not as strong as an adult eraser. He can get lost in his wolf form and forget who he really is. Howls when he sleeps


Name:Smitherines(Smit/Smitty)*david 4 now*

dna:fox and red tailed hawk(wings are smoky colored

powers:can control gravitational pull(like make people float or stick to the ground)

personality:short temper and sarcastic, sly , joker, daredevil, extremist, loves to push ppls buttons, vicious, rebelious, pranker, pyro, arrogant, dramatic

Appearance: black phoenix tattoo on her wrist(which is fletch, flick, and her trademark, the girls have the phoenix on the inner wrist ).scars all over like fletch and flick,xpecially one that starts from her hip and slices across her stomach. fox ears an and tail are unmorphable unfortunatly can morph into full fox. but thats it. dark red hair with subtle white and black streaks that comes down to her shoulders, strait, dark grey eyes with black and red flecks.

History:fox avian experiments for parents, grew up with fletch and flick. one month younger than flick. she trained as an assassin w/ flick since they were six. always depended on fletch and flick to back her up. devestated when flick escape and refused 2 go w/ her.

fav color:red gold and gray

fav sport:unlike flick'slove of cars and motorcycles(street racing), she loves rugby and ice hockey

casual clothes: dark fitting shirts and baggy sweats or shorts, red hemp anklet w/ a metal sun on it, reef shoes(flip flops) wears red or black bandana

strengths: pyro, fighting, hacking computers or any software, distractions, taking orders, break ins,

weaknesses:temper, loud, spiteful, distracted alot, bad with cars and motorcycles, forgetful, spontaneous
Star.Light.Star.Bright897 chapter 9 . 3/30/2011
Wait! Snow has wings, black wings
Star.Light.Star.Bright897 chapter 17 . 3/30/2011
Short Chapter, but I'm glad they got back together. Here's a character for David.

Name: Snow

Age: 13

DNA: cobra snake and raven

Hair color: black tinted with green

Skin: scales in some parts, light greenish skin

Height: 5'8

Other parts: forked tongue and snake eyes

Wings: none

Romance: yes

Powers: telekinesis and mind reading

History: she was DNA modified in her mom's womb with a bunch of others. Train to be an assassin
Star.Light.Star.Bright897 chapter 16 . 2/27/2011
I'm guessing Joseph is Robin. Wow, everyone really should've listened to Violet, then they wouldn't have gotton locked up. Up date sooner!
dramaqueen101 chapter 15 . 2/15/2011
Star.Light.Star.Bright897 chapter 15 . 2/14/2011
Oh my god! That's so funny! I'm on the phone with my friend and she thinks I'm crazy! I can't believe they kissed!
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