Reviews for Of Surprises
anaa-pixie chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
extremely cute!
Love From A Muggle chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I usually don't leave remarks in reviews that are nit-picky, but my only thing that I really had a problem with was:

However, I am getting ahead of myself.

The story starts on that drizzly Tuesday.

it sounded like a narrator for a book. Who was doing the talking?

Other than that, I really liked how you had Lily arguing with James and assumed he messed with her hair. That would make someone hate valentines day.
Inkfire chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I like this! It was original and very sarcastic. Lots of fun :)
Night Owl 303 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
HAHAHAHA. I like it, romance with a bit of hilarity.
Aimee chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Hey! You're back! For the first time in ages! Hello!

I loved it - I want to say nicely structured, but I don't want to sound like an English teaccher, so I won't. :)

All in all, nice comeback :) I've missed you! xxx
loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
This was cute, and very well written. Nicely done! :)
thenewkait chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Really good. I love how you played them up. Very well written. I can't wait to read more.

~thenewkait