|Reviews for Of Surprises|
| anaa-pixie chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
| Love From A Muggle chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I usually don't leave remarks in reviews that are nit-picky, but my only thing that I really had a problem with was:
However, I am getting ahead of myself.
The story starts on that drizzly Tuesday.
it sounded like a narrator for a book. Who was doing the talking?
Other than that, I really liked how you had Lily arguing with James and assumed he messed with her hair. That would make someone hate valentines day.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I like this! It was original and very sarcastic. Lots of fun :)
| Night Owl 303 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
HAHAHAHA. I like it, romance with a bit of hilarity.
| Aimee chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Hey! You're back! For the first time in ages! Hello!
I loved it - I want to say nicely structured, but I don't want to sound like an English teaccher, so I won't. :)
All in all, nice comeback :) I've missed you! xxx
| loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
This was cute, and very well written. Nicely done! :)
| thenewkait chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Really good. I love how you played them up. Very well written. I can't wait to read more.