|Reviews for Unconventional|
| meteobreak chapter 8 . 9/15/2011
I finally got up the guts to read the 120k roleplay and I must say, I totally understand why you would lose interest in this fanfic when everything was nicely covered in the rp (although when I got to the end I was surprised it sort of just ended like that).
It was a really nice read, thanks for posting it!
Really looking forward to whatever you come up with next!
| meteobreak chapter 7 . 9/7/2011
Dropping a review because I seriously like the stories you write and would love to see more written.
Concepts #1 and 3 appeal to me the most, I enjoy stories where lust is described heart-wrenchingly compared to easier stories, which is why I really like reading your fics (and also because I prefer Yamachi).
I'd like to see the RP posted, I was quite amused and enjoyed reading this fic, and am sad to see it abandoned so I'd like to wrap it up, please.
I'm looking forward to your next work/update!
| flameretardant chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
WIP means "Work in progress" - this story is now abandoned so it's no longer a WIP.
| CrossoverxToxThexDarkxSide chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
What does WIP mean? Written In POV?
| jazzmiin05 chapter 5 . 1/10/2011
| MrGooseyMoose chapter 5 . 1/9/2011
Now THAT, was one hell of an interesting chapter. )
Ahem...ok, I absolutely loved the idea of making the pair do this kind of play together; it makes the reader feel a kind of inevitability about the fact that they're gonna fall for each other - for no one can escape the power of Romeo and Juliet! XD
As usual, in terms of your writing style you were sound; there were no problems, it was easy to get into (really; I only woke up quarter of an hour ago, and I'm still in bed. I was still fine to read it haha!) and your use of powerful description is nothing short of AWESOME. Seeing as though you said you don't often write this kind of scene, (where people fall for each other) I think you did an amazing job. Honestly, this is brill by anyone's standard. )
Now, this is a fic where the reader is constantly looking forward - it HAS to keep getting better and better, simply because it's one where the pair get closer as time goes on. It's a little pressure on your part, admittedly; but I'm looking forward to seeing what you can do!mCan't wait for more-sies! D
| MrGooseyMoose chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
...clever, very clever. D Me wanty moooooore, though! Also, I loved how gennai made his way into the fic! XD Awesomeness! D
| MrGooseyMoose chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
Aaaah, I like where this is going. BUT WE WANT TAITO, AS SOONIES AS POSSIBLE! D
Ahem...I wanna say that I loved this line. "But I was five then and she had cooties." Haha, put's childhood into perspective pretty well.
Looking forward to more...
| MrGooseyMoose chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
Hmm...interesting way of doing things! )
Always cool to see things from a new perspective; though, admittedly, I would have liked it to be a little longer so we know how he's feeling through the rest of it. Ah, well. Guess that's me being picky! )
| MrGooseyMoose chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Wow, that was actually really good hahahaha. )
Ahem...alrighty. So, your writing style is sound; as is your ability to create believable, relatable dialogue between the characters. Who, btw, were introduced very well. I'd love to see where this ends up. )