Reviews for Pyretic Ritual
narusaku143 chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
Oh I love it.
ahmadaziz chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Okay this was great.

I dont usually dig into simple lemons aka a lemon for lemon's sake but this was anything but. You managed to keep it tasteful and beautiful and every other good compliment that comes into your creative mind. I only read it because it was Narusaku and you, sir, you were able to meet the high standards of literary excellence I expect of my favorite couple.

Only thing left to say is keep sharing such wonderful stories.

Hope you enjoy writing them as much as I enjoy reading them.
HybridTailedFox chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Loved it keep up the great work man.

Oh and a quick question are you a NaruSaku fan? Also what other pairings do you like?

-HybridTailedFox, Hybrid, Fox, Kyuubi
urfan chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
...yeah.. this is shit.

The actual content presentation is on the upper level but the content itself is sadly lacking in depth in a big way.

Maybe some of your other stuff is better. This was porn without plot
TarynCasey chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
That was so effing cute! And believable. And well written. And awesome. Just awesome.
GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Nice story, very romantic, keep it up
blinded-oedipus chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Very nice. I loved the fact that this was a lemon with a plausible plot. And bonus points for being well written. A coherent sentence is sometimes hard to find in the lemon world. Great job!
CrazyNaruSakuFan chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
sexy, cute and funny loved it :)
Dudtheman chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
nice lemon with a plot only thing i can think of is a little more sakura cares about naruto in the start so its not so left field at the end not bad enjoyed thanks again for the read )
Devil'sLittlePrincess16 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
hey man that was awesome! i dont think ive seen any others from you? if you finish another narusaku story...think you can let me know? other than that the story was awesome. i cant wait to read more from you
shadows24 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Very nice story and the ending was great all in all it was one of the most romantic one-shots I've read and I cant wait for more
kidloco chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
i like it (hey i can post in my account again.. yay lol)

can be interesting if had more chapter but i think is right right now..., is very good and wow, suprise suprise :D
Blazing CobaltX chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Omgomgomgomgomg! Awesome! :D Luv it!

I really want to see more of your stories!
nicthepunk chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
That story was really cute and believable! Nice work! :)
strawberryshortcake chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
It seems realistic. And I can imagine it perfectly. Good work and keep it up. I'm subscribing to you so I can see more of your awesome work :D
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