Reviews for Jade's feelings on a letter for Beck Oliver
tori chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
jade west 1. chapter 1
jade i hate you and i do not like you beck is my not your boyfriend so i never want to see you again and you are a bitch so good bye
Hayley chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
This is too sappy for Beck. He is robot-like, really. This is just...so out of character. Much, much, MUCH too sappy.

Beck wouldn't call Jade Jadelyn unless it was a joke.
Hayley chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Please never call Beck 'Beckley'. Jade would NEVER call him that, and even if her full name was Jadelyn, she'd never address herself as that.

Why bold some things? It distracts the readers.

It is slut, not slot.

This is too out of character for Jade. Jade would never do this. It's too weak and vulnerable. It is also too poetic.

This isn't hate, it's constructive criticism.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
too sappy & ooc pls
asian fusion-tike chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
ohhhh that was so beautiful! 3
Serene Cullen chapter 2 . 2/16/2011
Cute two shot its a nice reaffirmation of their relationship
kab16 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
cute. a little out of character, but still very cute :)
I am who I am forever chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Luv it!
Dancing Through Daisies chapter 2 . 12/16/2010
how wonderful!
Dancing Through Daisies chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
lovely! you should write Beck's response to her questions. i really like it, i love Bade too :)
Darkestpowerslover234 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
This was short but very good. I think that this letter was really more like Jade asking Beck how he feels rather than Jade telling Beck how she feels.