|Reviews for I Knew It Wasn't Dean|
| StarTrail chapter 1 . 2/23
T.T tears in my eyes at the ending.
| Tzapporah chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
That was absolutely beautiful and tragic. I kinda wish there was more to it.
| Eternal She-Wolf chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
This is amazing - it struck me right into the feels.
| MrSlinkerman chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
That was beautiful.
| LoveJoyJohnlock chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
This is a really powerful fic. I love the way it delves into hell and Sammy's mind. The ending was emotionally intense and almost made me cry. The repetition of "I knew it wasn't Dean" really drove the point home, this coming from someone who doesn't normally like repetition in stories. I'm jealous. I honestly am. Thank you TVTropes for bringing me to this place
But I can't just spend my time on this site praising stories like that, can I? That's not what reviewing is for. I need to give some honest critique.
You use a few abstractions that I think you portray better earlier through sensual details earlier on. For example, the use of the word "regret" doesn't seem needed. You can already feel Sam's guilt through the details and the way that he keeps seeing Dean's face in his mind. To me, Sam being tortured by not-Dean is a manifestation of his guilt for hurting him and for hurting Cas and Bobby. There are a few other instances of this, but this is really my only big problem.
My smaller, more nitpicky one is some of the descriptions are a little off. For example, I had to read the line "long bones" multiple times and I still don't know what it means. There are only a few of these, but be conscious of where you place your adjectives.
Other than that, I'm suffering from a severe case of writer envy, and I'm looking forward to reading more pieces from you.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
DEAN IS NOT THE ONLY ONE CRYING THANKS A LOT MY ROOM IS FLOODED NOW
| FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
That was beautiful. Thank you for writing.
| Terikel chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Love this. Heartbreaking and beautiful and IC and oooh the (b)romance. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art. :)
| IM CRYIN chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
THAT WAS THE MOST GODDAMN BEAUTIFULLY HEARTBREAKING FIC I'VE EVER READ LITERALLY THE BEST THANK YOU THANK YOU ARE YOU JESUS BECAUSE THIS IS THE EXACT THING I'VE ALWAYS WANTED YOU ARE PERFECT
| Uryuu-Nipaa chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Oh my good, that was really good. And really sad, but mostly really good.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
awww. That's so, so-it evokes my feels!
| sheila.jordan.3348 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
What a great story.
| Guest of Anon chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
A beautiful story, but the end there: that was crushing.
| krizzaaaa chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
That was wonderfully awesomely beautiful... I'm crying just like dean
| God chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Wow... Thats just...