|Reviews for Jiraiya's Mistake|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Whaaaaaaat a cliffhanger :-( would love to read the next chapter though
| Tutu chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Funny but what waterfall?
| DarkMatterLord chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Kera, now this is way overdue. Someone may have told you already or you found out, but when people become Shinobi, I think they say that they are technically adults, so they can do that. Anyways, this story is one of those stories that I read over so many times. It's just great.
| KakashiXSakura16 chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
omg this was halarious XD its so funny i was laughing throughout half of it XD good job
| Roxas-Namikaze88 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Oh jiraiya you are so a dead man by tsunade it was funny
| Kera-Chan chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
There 13 and had sex!? SICK! WTF?!
| M-LukaxxLiexxNaruHina chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
o my gawd. i couldn't stop laughing. so fawny. oh jiraiya...
| 9foxgrl chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
This is totally an LOL moment!
Please add more!
| animerc chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
more please more
| hiNAru Aburame chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
And... Wow?... jeje, great.
Greetings and till the next fic. n_n
| Towards the sun chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I love it, but i'm really curious about the actual content of that book. I mean, the only clue you left is the word 'waterfall'. On the side note, its a little disturbing that they both just thirteen and doing that.
| Chewie Cookies chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Oh, he's dead... or at least his man parts are, lolz.
Awesome oneshot! Melikey!
| Lander Blazer chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
HAHAHAHA! Man that was a funny one, poor Naruto and Hinata... Having the whole 'scene' revealed to the entire world's pervert population, I wonder what is gonna to happen to Jiraya?