Reviews for Baby Talk
Fanficaddict12 chapter 3 . 1/3/2011

Hey, this is great! :D I can't wait for more!
KeRose chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
Speechless, for two reasons.

1) Am I the only reviewing this fic?

2) Yes, its natural for Yosuke to doubt. We get that facet of him from the first chapter. From a progressive reader's perspective, I am not to sure what "new things" this chapter has to contribute to the overall story.

this could just be me though, so ff you could please clarify it to me, feel free to PM me.

~K~( )
KeRose chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
AHAHAHAHAHA. Very nice insert into a scene from before their daughter's born. I like how easy it was to turn a sweet scene into one of hilarity. Then again, bringing up Trial of the Dragon always does that in most ChiexYosuke situations.
KeRose chapter 1 . 12/20/2010

First apology off the bat: Fuuyuko, I am imagining a cross between Priestess and Strength of P3. lol. Sorry had to get that off my chest.

Best Yosuke Line in this fic:


"Yosuke, haven't you ever seen my dad? His eyes are the same color."

"Holy fuck, Chie, you had sex with your dad?"



While seeming abit too idiotic of a statement, it was well-delivered in the dialogue as a product of Yosuke's building skepticism. And it ends, with Yosuke questioning if Chie is the legitimate mother, despite being witness to the birth. lol.


~K~( )