Update this quicker or I'll strangle you.

How would Garrus know to tease the Rookie about Shepard's driving when this is the first time they've been in a Mako?

It's like you don't even care about continuity.

Firing an anti-materiel rifle in a pressurized environment... that's also a starship. Is the Rookie supposed to retarded, or are you the retard?

You skipped "unnecessary dialogues" and added your own cringe self-insert dialog instead.

JD is an ODST. He wasn't accepted into their ranks by being a moronic hothead. He's a professional soldier. He doesn't whine and complain when things aren't going his way.

Speaking of the Superintendent, I can imagine that as the Rookie A.I partner, I can only imagine the confusion of the Mass Effect Characters trying to figure out what the Superintendent is saying.

I found this fic today and is sadden that it hasnt been updated in years. I love finding fics that involve the rookie or others odsts in mass effect rather than master chief and spartans. Rip this beautiful fic

It's a damn shame that this story hasn't been updated in 7 years, since having a Rookie that survived both the Human/Covenant War and the Flood is a very interesting concept. One thing that's always been a little disappointing in these "Halo Characters thrown into the Mass Effect universe" stories is that they always shy away from diving into said characters' personal histories with Shepard's crew.
I'm sure Shepard would love to hear Rookie talk about what it was like to be in a squad like Alpha-Nine. Reminiscing about his squadmates wouldn't violate OpSec.
There's even a story here on that has Rookie accidentally experience a three-way Prothean memory exchange with Javik and Shepard.. AND THEY STILL DON'T TALK ABOUT HIS PAST! They only allude to it in a roundabout way...

nice work bro

nice bro

They’re called Single Occupant Exoatmoapheric Insertion Vehicles (SOEIV), not HEVs. Drop pods for short.

so iam guessing that you didn't finish playing tomb raider an farcry3 since you haven't updated this story well hurry up an beat them and then update soon please

I thought this was a great story but I guess I should assume no more updates right.

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i hope this going to reach mass effect 3 sequel the ending will be rookie taking the position of shepard where he will going to sacrifice himself for everyone and shepard live

No the Mass Effect armor is made of paper and cardboard.