Reviews for Playing by the Rules
Bioluminescence chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Great little story. Sad, but completely IC. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
rslhilson chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
This was very well-written and IC - really enjoyed it. Melancholy, yes, but also beautiful in the way they let themselves break the rules in their most vulnerable moments. Lovely piece.
Shadow Cat65 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I somehow missed this completely until now.

It is a bit sad but also seems very true to the characters.
MissBates chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Your summary is very apt: a bit melancholy. It's full of missed opportunities, and in some ways it shows everyone from their best and worst side.

A good piece that definitely deserves more reviews. I liked it even though I'm not a Hilson fan.