Reviews for Dark Wolves and Vampire Delights Outtakes
84gemstone chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
I loved it, what i don't get is why Jasper took the deer down for her?
84gemstone chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
As a first kiss goes that was some kiss :)
paula pattinson greatbatch chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Well i liked your view of transformation tbh it wasnt as long and drawn out and i like the fact that she wanted to go at Rose lmao! Go Alice!

Loving the sex in the forest! and the fact that they now have to go back to the cottage half naked with Rose in tow haha oh the embarrassment of it!

Great out take Becky loved it x
paula pattinson greatbatch chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I love this out take babe theyre so sweet together and its nice to see things from Alice's Pov for a change xx
Dangrdafne chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
Awesome extra chapter. I love that it is like Bella's from the saga but with all the great Alice characteristics. I adore Jasper and you write him so well. I just want to hug him. The Jasper and Alice love is amazing and you capture it perfectly. I look forward to more Alice POVs?

Thank you
joayla chapter 2 . 3/29/2011
I just have to say that was the best Alice transformation I have ever read! It was funny yet at the same time true to character with still a hint of drama of Alice being unprepared for the change. I loved the fact that her visions stopped her from wanting to kill the humans. And what with jasper inability to control her emotions was fantasic! but it was her realisation of the attire that she was in made this chapter truly priceless.

If I ever had to give an example of good fanfic this would be the chapter I would give!

Truly an amazing outtake! I can't wait for bella's change xxxx
TwiWeasel chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Awesome, Becky! Alice is going to be an awesome vamp! And the hot sex they're gonna have! *fans self* Wowza!
Angeldolphin01 chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
I love it.
StackedLikeSookie chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
Jasper against a tree-yes! Thanks for some more Jasper yumminess. Was ok with the transformation, all that burning & screaming is gross. Hope Bella & Alice get to see each other soon. X
TheLadyKT chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
woo hoo alice is awake
Twilight'sPuppetMaster chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
*fans self rapidly* Damn girl! that was HOT!

i need more of those chapters! lol

Twilight'sPuppetMaster chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
*squeals* I love this one, Alice is great! lol xxx
MinervaCullen chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I wonder who will figure it out first... hmmm
joayla chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Woo hoo loved that little extra Hun! Can you send jasper to my house!
Dangrdafne chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Um yea wow! That kiss was intense and amazing. Mmmmm I love Jasper and you write him beautifully. And Alice needs to be a friend of mine - especially your Alice. I love this outtake - it is perfect. Mmmm I think I have to go back and read the kiss part again. Thank you for this bit of warmth on such a freezing day :)
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