|Reviews for Road Trip|
| Markus Ramikin chapter 1 . 7/12
This is the best one I've read from you yet.
Also, Hannelore is waaaaay more sane than Luna. :) Even if she does subconsciosuly want to kill her friends with a knife.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 6/15
A very nice story.
| old-crow chapter 1 . 5/16
Roll me away is a great story in the form of a song. This was a very fine story, though I freely admit that I would have preferred a fourth chapter with little kids with bushy hair and green eyes. You could always add a fourth chapter. Healing is good.
Thanks for sharing your story.
| FirePhoenix86 chapter 1 . 2/26
This was beautifully written. I loved that it didn't extend into Harry and Hermione starting a relationship. That was the perfect place to end it. I liked the pairings and I think you stuck to the character's personalities well. Luna seemed a bit out of character with the OCDness and by calling Harry by his last name.
As a therapist, I kind of hated Hermione's psychologist. That person did not seem ethical or like she was working for Hermione. If a client decides to do something you think is a bad idea, I don't think it's wise to throw it in their face after the fact. "I told you so" is the worst thing a therapist could say to a client.
Definitely a great story!
| roon0 chapter 1 . 2/19
A throughly enjoyable and even thoughtful one shot. Thank you for sharing.
| Josiah chapter 1 . 2/2
I like Luna.
| q.thews chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Interesting story ;-) , one of the few where Lavender is not just tapestry and it is not a bad/plain stupid person.
| Sleeper 3173 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Bahahahaha! Gotta love Hannalore!
| RykOakwine chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Dude, that was awesome in every way.
| Nytefyre chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
I liked this journey for Harry.. and yes, I was thinking of Hanalore when reading about Luna and her "scourgify, scourgify, scourgify!" Thanks for a fun journey - and while I would love to see more of what happens with Harry and Hermione, this was a great ending.
Thanks for posting.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Oh man, this both cracked me up and had me cringing in embarrassment and sympathy - in equal measure; embarrassment for his lack of errm, "experience" and sympathy with Parvati's death, along with the other casualties. In fact, only today I compared my mother to Neville Chamberlain in his capacity as an advocate of appeasment...
| Random number generator chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
"Not to mention what it would cost him personally if he lost his best friend in life by thinking with his dick" sentence is missing "." at the end.
"Nothing will ever be ok again. is missing second " sign.
I liked this story, really interesting one.
| Sabaku no Sable chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
The only thing i kept thinking about was the two twins Luna has which makes me wonder if they are Harry's children. XD
| bobbo chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
eh, the luna thing at the end was out of left field. i can't see her being like that. the hermione plot was also dropped by the wayside in a rowlingish way. if 100% is a professional story, i came in expecting 70% and got 50%. this review does not merit capitalization. meh
i suppose it could be much much worse...
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Brilliant and surprising at the same time, as always. Thanks for this.
I don't know how you could follow this up with a sequel, but I would be interested to see it.
Two items: First, your use of possessives and apostrophes needs work (it's means 'it is', not 'belonging to it'). Second, your astronomy needs work - prior to full moon, the moon rises before sunset, not after.
Somehow I missed this in your listing originally, but found it at Hurin3's community.