|Reviews for The Great Magical Adventure|
| teddy.jan.79 chapter 15 . 3/20
plz write more have harry get fuck by shorty
| Cocoa-potter chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
I do hope u continue this story. I wanna see Shorty and Harry get together.
| KyuubiChild717 chapter 15 . 12/3/2013
Really cute, makes me smile
| Ddragon21 chapter 5 . 11/4/2013
isn't shorty a dude?
| Willow Grove Tiger chapter 15 . 5/12/2013
if ron/cero made one kage bunshin, would it be a doble cero?
| VONDON WILES chapter 15 . 5/7/2013
THAT HARRY POTTER AND LAND BEFORE TIME FAN FICTION STORY THE GREAT MAGICAL ADVENTURE CHAPTER 15 CERO WAS GREAT AND I HOPE LITTLEFOOT AND CERA AND DUCKY AND PETRIE AND SPIKE AND ALI AND RHETT AND CERO AND HARRY POTTER CAN GET BACK TO THE GREAT VALLEY AND STOP VOLDEMORT AND REDCLAW
| DragonFire Princess chapter 15 . 2/25/2013
Love the way this chapter has been writing, I hope the rest of the chapters will be just like this.
| Valiant chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I readead your story 4 times it is a very good story.
I want to give to you an idea do you thinked to write a land before time and ed edd n'eddy fanfiction.
| To the TARDIS chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/26/2012
THAT WAS COOL AND FUNNY AT THE SAME TIME AND SHORTY I HOPE YOU KILL MULFOY
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/5/2012
so ronald weasely is acutely ceras twin brother cero and im guessing the green sky bolt was you know who's doing that sent cero to harry's time right
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/4/2012
can they be saved
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/4/2012
wait a second bron is harrys dad how is that possible unless bron somehow ended up in harrys timeline when he was a hatchling and was adopted am i right
| BaKuRa Kurama Theif queen chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
Well i'm interested to know what happens next.