|Reviews for The Great Magical Adventure|
| Allen Poe chapter 15 . 2/12
I DO NOT KNOW WHAT IS STOPPING YOU FROM FINISHING THIS STORY BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU TO MAKE MORE AND MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! The boyfriend love rellashionship between Harry and Shorty is so beautiful that i just can not wait to find out more! So please make more chapters as soon as you can. For your fans and for yourself please.
| draco7347 chapter 15 . 6/27/2016
love story cant wait for new chapters
| Mirage chapter 15 . 4/24/2016
sad that you stoped writing this Story, i really would have liked to see where this goes
maybe you come back one day and finish this Story
its 2016 now
| Mirage chapter 4 . 4/24/2016
interesting Story, and maybe future Pairing...but Shorty is a dino, a longneck, they are large...can Harry get his animagus to be one of them ?, if not ...im unsure...
| Felina the nekomimi chapter 7 . 8/29/2015
Don't worry I know how u feel, I, myself have aspergers too.
| SnowWolf43 chapter 15 . 7/9/2015
plese dear god come back and start up your stories again plese
| Chop chop 2025 chapter 3 . 4/4/2015
Vary exlent vary vary extent I hope you continue or even make a sequel. Oh can you please make. The chapters longer
Thank you for such a brelent story
| MozenrathLuvr chapter 10 . 5/18/2014
Ron is Cera's brother?! Ok...I wasn't expecting that.
| MozenrathLuvr chapter 7 . 5/18/2014
I have Asperger's as well sweetie, and you're doing fine.
| MozenrathLuvr chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
I have never heard of a HP and LBT crossover!
| teddy.jan.79 chapter 15 . 3/20/2014
plz write more have harry get fuck by shorty
| Cocoa-potter chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
I do hope u continue this story. I wanna see Shorty and Harry get together.
| KyuubiChild717 chapter 15 . 12/3/2013
Really cute, makes me smile
| Ddragon21 chapter 5 . 11/4/2013
isn't shorty a dude?
| Willow Grove Tiger chapter 15 . 5/12/2013
if ron/cero made one kage bunshin, would it be a doble cero?