Reviews for A New Life
Guest chapter 7 . 6/12/2013
I love it! I can't wait until their is more.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/21/2012
more!
nachellers chapter 7 . 6/18/2012
This is an awesome story so far. I love it and cant wait to read more.
Lady Elena Bella Petrova chapter 7 . 11/28/2011
Love this story so far! hoping to read more
Kris Ivashkov25 chapter 7 . 7/25/2011
I love it. Update soon.
vamplover87.9 chapter 7 . 6/22/2011
i lve it aNOTHER CHAPTHER PLZZZZZ
RoseAmorettaHathaway chapter 7 . 4/13/2011
I LOVE IT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!:D I never imagined that alexandre would have cheated on raven. Then Raven would end up with Jagger! O:
Saissister chapter 7 . 1/29/2011
Update?
Tom Riddle's reluctant bride chapter 5 . 1/8/2011
Great chapter, I do hope Raven ends up with Jagger.
Spider Baby-Firefly chapter 4 . 1/8/2011
This story has a lot of potential. You're a pretty good writer, and you have a firm grasp on characterization. There are just a few things that are slightly off, like Alexander's behavior-it cold be believable that he would fall for someone else, but he wouldn't act so harshly towards Raven. There are several other instances of rushed writing and OOC incidents. I'm telling you this because many writers in this category fall into this trap, but there's a big difference: most of them aren't as good as you, that's why I'm telling you this. If you though out reactions and timing carefully, you could avoid these problems. Also, the storyline here isn't particularly fresh, so I'm hoping you have a somewhat original storyline planned out. I'm sorry if this seems a little harsh. Anyway, I'm glad to see moe Jagger/Raven in the fandom! Keep writing!
naturallyclutzy93 chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
when are you updating?
lullabydoll456 chapter 4 . 12/26/2010
Luv ur story u gotta continue I can't wait to read more
Mrs. Alexander Sterling chapter 4 . 12/23/2010
I NEED MORE! Please update soon!
Mrs. Alexander Sterling chapter 3 . 12/23/2010
Whoaaa. x) Amazingly good.
hisgirltuesday chapter 4 . 12/21/2010
Wow...please update soon!
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